The Monsters First Love
Madeline Colter despises her country, Grandor, home to the most conservative and racist people to exist, the only country to reject people of other species while having a half-vampire prince. But when the prince comes of age and every woman in the country is forced to participate in a competition for the position of queen, Madeline is dragged into it.
She expected to be failed immediately, not that she'd meet with the so-called feared prince and realize they may not be so different after all.
Alexei, known as the fearful war monger prince, feels little affection for anyone. Ostracised among nobility with his only protector now dead he has to pick a queen to ascend the throne. What he hadn't expected was to meet a girl that would make him realize how touch-starved he truly was.
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I stared at the people below me, all their faces enamoured with awe as they beheld me. I was a commoner moments before, but here I sat- a crown atop my head.
I felt his fingers squeeze my hand and tried to stop my flinch. His red eyes boring into the side of my face. I knew he was grinning from ear to ear. I knew he had set all this up for me. Not to show me. But… to warn me.
Thousands of eyes leered at me and I knew what was to come would be much worse than what had already happened.
“Long Live the King and his Queen!” The chants began and I could feel a prickle in the corner of my eyes.
“Do not cry”. His cold words were warmer than the finger that brushed my eyelid. My eye stilled and slid toward him. “This is all yours now. Just as much as it is mine. A country in the hands of those who hate it. Let’s ruin it all”. The fire burning in those eyes shook my core.
“Long… live the king” I said slowly and deliberately, watching his smile stretch further.
“Long live the queen”.
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I looked at the massacre around us. There was blood everywhere… why didn't he care for that?
"Why do you want mine?" I asked curiously, face turning pink when he lifted his intoxicated eyes towards me and his face was flushed, lips panting. It sent a strange thrill through me to see a man of such power on his knees, practically begging.
"I want all of you. Everything" he laid a kiss on my skin, breathing in the scent.
Warning: slow- burn R18
I have too much to say about this book but I will make it so concise. I will start with the language, the author did really put the effort to make the language relatable and very clear. The character design is great and the world-building is too good. The story title really makes a lot of sense and the blurb is a great reading to make me want to open the book. However, there is a flaw. The author must change the book cover. This might scares more readers away.
I read first five chapters and it's really making me want to read more. I especially liked how the character of FL is written. I enjoyed reading the story. It's very captivating. Looking forward to read more.😊
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Intriguing from the start. I love this kind of fantasy romance. The conversations are enjoyable. The way you introduced your FL and then matched her attitude with it, is superb👌 . The update is required. Maintaining consistency will surely lead to success.
The thing which I like the most is the way how author describes everything. The novel has a great story. The thing which kept me stick to reading was how good the author's choice of words is. The language is clear and easy. Thumbs up for the effort
The books very well written and it's very engaging right from the beginning. I am still on my way to read till the latest chapter but I can assure my fellow readers the story is very enjoyable to read. The sentences flow smoothly and the language is very clear as well. I liked the author's way of describing things and I hope his novel truly succeeds since it deserves it. All the best author!
So very captivating. From the words to how they are used… brining it all together like the dark magical story it is. A magical world of supernatural creatures, two intriguing leads and romance that’s so very much worth reading.
Yes. Yes. I love contemporary romance and to make it even better it involves royal family. The book is well written, and I love the conversation between the FL and her family. [img=recommend]
I really like the way the author describe the background of the story very well. And Fl also have a very strong personality. I really suggest you all to give this story a try. All the best dear author 👍👍
The story is very interesting. 😍😍 One of my favourite category. ❤❤❤❤❤ And also I love your writing style, it is amazing!!!! ❤❤❤ Good job auther!!! Good Luck for your future!!! ❤