Date A Live: Starting as Acheron

I suppose it's customary for an author to give their own fanfic nothing but the highest praise, so here we are. While I'm at it, I guess I'll make a few things clear. 1. I have chosen to make my MC male, and there will be no harem. 2. I will try to recreate characters to the best of my ability, but please be understanding if I mess someone up. 3. I will be adding a bit of my own canon in order to explain the existence of my ol' MC. Thanks for reading, and I hope you enjoy.

Really well made FF, the writing quality is definitely one of the best in the FF category. It feels like… well, an actual book unlike the other brainrot english that’s on this app. Good OC, honestly surprised at how well you made Acheron fit in the [Date A Live] world. I will be honest thou, upload is kinda slow… but the writing quality makes up for it. (I’d rather have slow uploads with good writing then brainrot everyday) +No Harem Overall I give you a cooki for you good work, ty.

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As of now I have no problem with this fanfic, it has the same essence as an machine translation but without the bad stuff. Also this is just a personal pet peeve I have with some fanfic is that they just follow the plot but with there oc, without changing anything. Some of my favorite fanfic are ones that change the plot in interesting ways. As of now I think this fanfic is heading in the right direction, please continue cooking author.

Sinceramente me esta gustando hasta ahora. No hay tantos capitulos como para juzgarlo mejor pero me gusta. 💥💥💥🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫😐😐😐😐😐😐

what can i say, amazing fanfic. Kyo is a great protagonist, generally serious but knows when to relax around the right person, which is Nia. Something that i enjoyed is specifically how slow and paced their romance is, feels very natural and proper. The characterization of other characters are also better than i thought, i dont know much about the source material (date alive) but none of them acted out of character from what they were established (I also love how they show development, especially yoshino, the ast captain, and shidou for some part)

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It starts out strong and stays mostly strong but then it falls apart with decisions. It not a bad story, it’s pretty good compared to the rest but it starts getting well boring for me.

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It's pretty good, not the best story I've ever seen, but it's still pretty great. I love how they represented how powerful Acheron's powers are and how there are consequences to going too far with them. Can't wait to see more!

pretty good I recommend. novel itself has potential

Bro I need more. Don’t stop the from bud.

I don’t really do reviews, so I’ll try to make this brief. Essentially, the author does a pretty decent job at creating funny moments, serious moments and wholesome moments. The characters feel pretty fleshed out too.