Ryu Natsume was a normal high-school boy in Tokyo, Japan. He was sociable, friendly, and outgoing which makes him very popular around town.
But behind that smile, sorrow and thoughts of death are what lingers around. His mind, depressed due to the rejection of his love made him filled with sadness.
He then took the easy way out, 'suicide'.
What awaits him after death is a land where a voice named 'Alice' called heaven. Faced with circumstances where he must be reborn, he start his adventure as he chose to be reborn as an Elf. But that's not how our story goes...
Very cool. Ahahahah I'm the author so peace to all Now I just want to say that this was my very first take in writing so I am still developing my skills it only has 4 chapters and I know that the chapters feel short, I will try to improve the word count little by so Im looking forward to when that happens
U think that the author should continue because this is actually a great story .......................................................... . ......... ...
Thumb's up!👍👍 Interesting story! Great plot. Despite having a slow pace of updates, I give it five.. for the story was cool and funny... It hooks me in.. Great job! Keep writing!
I'm giving a 5* review despite the updates not being stable, based on the promise by the Author that it will be. The story itself is light, refreshing and interesting. If you like RPG / game elements sort of story, yet not so heavy on the data of the stats / skills etc, then this is for you. It has the right balance to keep one interested but not so detailed that it can get confusing (or you get lost in understanding the concepts)
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I totally love it. I can imagine this original novel go 300+chapter and still being amazing and exciting Keep up the good work. I support you!
Estou gostando do desenvolvimento da história, está no ritmo correto. Eu estou cheio de expectativas para como esse novel vai se desenrolar. O único lado ruim que eu encontrei foi o pouco desenvolvimento do MC.
My heart is up and down with this fiction, as the story goes, it brought me into a fascinating world which made me realize how tedious the real world is
The story, if it's interesting, though, the world seems underdeveloped, I hope it explains a bit more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is amazing and very well written! The writing technique is very good too! It has hooked me! Looking forward to the next chapters!!! Keep writing!!! :)
I've only red the synopsis but I think your story is great. Interesting it is for me, good quality of writing and not confusing at all. Your story is on my reading queue Author-san!~ Hoping for more updates! ^^
I am only just starting, but so far I like the humor of the writing, but the world is still a bit confusing. Being overseen by Alice the immature goddess is going to cause Ryu some problems!
Ok so this book caught me by surprise. Generally i like rpg like game worlds but most are so complicted it ruins the story for me. But this one is ****** enough for me to understand. I like the characters so far as well as thr word development. For my personal opinion though. Yhe usage of " chan" and " kun" is cringy because alot of authors over do it. But its not cringy enough for me to stoo reading it. I will continue to read🤗🤗👌
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I don't have any words, the author is my friend so I'll just kindly message him the review so I'll just make this message longer so that it will appear as 140 characters