pokemon, the rise of the dragon king

It's actually difficult to try and read this. Would recommend learning grammar and spelling to raise your writing quality. Until then the story gets gimped by the poor quality.

Writing quality- There are quite a bit of spelling mistakes and problems with grammar. Stability- Good, at the cost of quality. Story Development- Not totally predictable but ruined by simplistic thinking. Character Design- Romance too fast paced and characters are basically 1 dimensional every conversation has been animated or boring. World Background- Did you even bother? **. Not a diss but my honest opinion.

So the title is pokemon, the rise of the dragon king. But he is reincarnated as a human. So will he only have dragon type, or primarily focus on Dragon types, or are the title pokemon, the rise of the dragon king only to get readers?

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this Pokemon fan fic i like the idea but the quality is **** it has no emotion no logic and it is to fast-paced and from what i read in the other reviews it feels like the 5 star review are alternative accounts just to give 5 stars or just haven't read the novel and i read 7 chapters of this and i will be glad to tell you this immortal thought it was one of the most disgusting novel i have ever read

I am a big fan do what you want to do I love what you have done so far. I can't what for more chapters but I don't what you to rush. Keep what you are going and want to do. So far it is good in my opinion. If my meaning means anything.

Brake Up with Giselle she is just getting in the way plus she can be a ***** everything else is perfect 👌 love ❤️ this 😻😻😻😻😻😻😻💡💡😻💡💡💡💡😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻

for me personally the pace of how the story going is too fast. mc become op without any hitch and too much time skip. grammar could be better but still readable. in my opinion a good fanfic is one where you can enjoy without you knowing the original works. this novel doesn't explain anything so you're required to know the original story to enjoy this. not my cup of tea but good luck in your endeavors

I'll give you all my spirit stones!! if you don't drop it and keep the Harem thing!!!! Finally some Pokemon Harem fanfic!!! and there is no fucking way I'm giving up reading this novel

A great star the mc in strong but not too strong and I like how the story is going know but I hope the updates is is solid 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤩🤩💯💯😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻💯

Keep going It’s a good start and the wishes are realistic I mean c’mon lol Good luck👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I will like to say is that I really enjoy reading this a lot and plus I’m a huge Pokemon fan since day one I like the plot and the story telling you are doing a excellent job keep up the good work ok looking forward to reading more

Best pokemon fanfic, keep it up! 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

This Is nice can't wait to see where you take this with his pokemon and his style of training the only thing I hope is that you dont get caught up in the harem