LEGENDARY MAGE KALI
Author: skull_sree
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Humans have been fighting with other-dimensional beings for generations.
Living a peaceful life has become a pipe dream for humans.
Kali, a powerful and kind-hearted mage unites the human race to fight with other dimensional
beings in hopes of achieving peace for the human race.
A major battle occurred between humans and other dimensional beings which sent the entire world into disarray.
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Story is still on the starting stage. It is a bit rough around the edges but I can see the improvement in language and grammar. The world building is still under development. The start of the story is good and I hope the development will be good as well.
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There's much improvement to be made. Although the plot is good, how the author conveys his story is a bit of a mess, which is a pity. I personally think there's potential in this. The description about the main character is still lacking so it's a bit hard to visualise or imagine how he is like. His thoughts and feelings were good. But that's about it. Overall, story development is good. A bit rushed yet alright. Description about character and place is still lacking, as mentioned before but can be improved. Grammar and paragraph blocks needs improvement as well, though it is still tolerable. I know it's hard for a non-native English speaker to write an English medium novel so I applaud the author's great attempt to write it. Thank you for the novel and wish you all the best, Author.