Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan

good setup so far and we been get a good image of his strength and character

Never thought I would write fan fiction. But here we are. As the author, it is an obligation that I rate it 5 stars. But I have been having fun writing this, so it is a 5/5 for me. Thanks for giving this humble creation a try, if you did. That's more than what I can ask for. :)

your English suck, one that requires multiple checks just to understand the scenes, it breaks the immersion, and the execution is so-so, the idea is noise but so far generic.idk why people rate it so high. It isn't even that good. average at best, unreadable at worst. (Y? again, your English is horrendous. )

MC starts dumb and acts like a simp (also, get ready for the author to start talking about his tastes and over describing women) But in the late 30s chapter wise the MC finally starts acting like a saiyan and has some pride. Didnt like the story at first but now i am relatively interested. Keep up the good work.

Great idea and potential storyline, but I will be honest here the grammar is a mess, I read chapter 4 to 7 and I have to read some sentences 2-3 times to understand what the author is trying to say.

will wait..m authot has dropped over 10 novels, 1 reached higher than 60 and the others 20-30 chapters before being dropped.

Awesome story thanks for making it also love how you made him a doomsday clone

boku no pico was my first anime. amazing masterpiece, but the characters could be more consistent. in the first episode pico had an amazing character arc with his best buddy. sadly, the ice cream arc was too sad to watch for me so i couldn't see because of the tears i shed that fateful day. the second episode was even better with much more characters and worldbuilding that made every fan shook in their seat. the swimming arc had great CGI and i know they just took it from Michael Faps but the technology they used to produce it was otherworldly. There was also mindnubbing storytelling thst told the children watching to eat fruit such as bananas. The third episode was my favourite. beautiful animation and city landscape that looks like it was taken from Paris and painted by Leonardo di Caprisun. 10/10 MAL score, modern classic, hyped for new season!

Bruh your updating status is harsh on my mind. I don’t know if I should even start enjoying this since it will prob get dropped.

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I'm on chapter 35 the story started off shakey but kept getting better and better each chapter

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this is one of the new good FF, so keep up the awesome work

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