"Peaceful" Life in a Different World

HEY GUYS AUTHOR HERE! I would just like to tell you that I have a new novel called 'How to Fight your Destiny' and it would be nice if you check it out. Personally, I can say that this new story is better than the Peaceful life. The story structure and the plot is better. It is also unique and not repetitive and it has a better and well-defined power system! I am confident on this new story of mine and it would be a great help if you can check it out and put a review on it. I will be uploading their once or twice daily which is why I may lessen my uploads in this story. please check it out and give me your reviews! https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/19524667106686805?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4312585333

Just a self-support review for my novel. i hope that you would enjoy my story!!!! I spent a lot of my time in this one so please if you have a spare time read this novel and give your feedbacl or reviews so I can improve my story! LOVE Y'ALL!!

Well, to best describe this story would be to simply call it shallow. The writing quality is ok, no horrible grammar, although the writing is rather simple. Updates are ok. Character Design could not possibly be any more simple and shallow and gets a big minus.World backround is also not well done. Story development is where it gets really strange, things just kinda jum ahead of themselves. There is no natural flow. Something is mentioned and boom it happens, not giving a shit about logic. Why this story has such a high rating I cant possibly fathom. It is by far not the worst and has decent enough gramar but characters are shallow and the story develops in weird jumpy ways. I am rating this work as below 3.

I definitely like this story! The concept about this is my cup of tea. I like that this story is not all about just fighting. It uncludes politics, internal problems and etc. This story is something that I would read everyday!

The story has a simplicity that was endearing at first. The story structure, MC internal monologue and thought patterns are done well. Scenes are shown instead of told which gives it a nice quality touch. Sadly the story failed absolutely in the dialogues. It's all: "blah blah blah?" he/she asked. "blah blah blah." he said. No descriptive lines how the question or sentence was presented. Or worst: "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah." (two people talking here with no identification or distinctions). The conversations themselves feel like 2 people who just learned the English language. Extremely short and simple/banal. If the author would just read up on how to write a dialogue or a Beta Reader then I would easily bump this story up a star and a half. Wish the author and translator best of luck.

Story to pass the time in leisure. Some words are misspelled but readable and context wise built the big picture of the story. Character and world building is a already taking shape and moving forward. Though I am a not a critic I hope some of my feedbacks help..

Your book is really interesting the characters the ability special powers just so fantastic man i was really hoping to improve like you those words were difficult for me to remember im not even living in america tho COOL :D p

The story goes fast but nothing much happens.most of what happened seemed forced and unnatural. ,...........................................

Love the concept! Please continue on uploading! I really like the idea of this story! You should try for mkre countries being involved so you can make this even better! This surely has a great potential!

Well, to best describe this story would be to simply call it shallow. Story development nosense. Stop in first chp. Isekay for children. Max 3 stars.

MC feel like player in a game and other character feel and interact with MC like NPC m

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