The Shadow of The Past
[Warning: R-18]
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Synopsis
What happens when the ice meets the fire in the same firm? Leonora has returned to her home country and this time it's for good. She didn't return alone, she brought someone with her who will add a bit of spice to her world. And to make things worse, she's going to be working with the man she left behind.
As soon as he hears the sound of Mr Dark calling out his name, Patrick Andrade feels a chill go through his entire body. And upon seeing the handsome Patrick Andrade, who has not lost his charm and good taste in clothes, dressed in a very formal outfit, Leonora feels nothing but indifference toward him. What Patrick didn't know is that just like him, Leonora as well is a different woman now. If they have become unapproachable cold-hearted people, it's because of what happened to them years ago.
What will happen when the truth of their past comes to light? Will Leonora overcome their differences and let their love rekindle or will she move on and start over with somebody else?
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Author's Note: If you're looking for a romantic story where the female lead has a weak personality - or women who endure insults and forgive everything in the name of love, I am sorry to inform you that this book is not about that. This story focuses more on a family's daily life, life as a couple, human rights, and making true friendships in adulthood.
This is my first original novel, so I hope you enjoy reading it. The book has a happy ending. If you like the story and would love to support this book, you can do it by leaving your feedback so I know where to improve.
Many thanks in advance for your support. With lots of love, Herlove.
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This is honestly a great book. It's so detailed, Interesting and mystrious. You really put a lot of work and your time into this story. Good job, Godmother. Keep it going, never give it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT! This is really a great book! PASSIONATE AND ENGAGING! I loved the uncertainties and certainties. There is too much that reflects true life events , from relationship, friendship, and family drama. I love all the women posture, but mostly Leonora. This novel is indeed a life lesson for many of us. It's never too late to start again and be happy! Congrats, author!
The setting of the story is very good and everything about the storylines is superb. Please update the next chapter. The quality of life story is excellent
The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.👏👏
I am looking forward to what will happen next specially because its romance and i am sure to add this on my library keep up the good wok my co-writer
Good story! Who doesn't like a strong, independent and brave female lead? Readers, if you're bored of reading books in which the female is weak and falls for the guy in a blink of eye, this book is definitely for you! You won't get bored. Your writing style is good. But I'd suggest you to edit the book once. There are a few grammatical errors as well as typos. Moreover, you haven't indicated which dialogue belongs to whom so that's confusing. 5/5 from me on story development and character design. The story is progressing nicely. Neither too far nor too slow. You've given a vivid description of Fl's working life so that was a plus for me. Overall good job! Keep writing!
it has too few chapters for now and mostly we see the main character and can understand who she is and what she represents. if it's a romance story spicing things up can help liven the situation up to keep readers reading, people love romance and they love good romance even more. the author can do many things since the groundwork seems to be taking shape. I see some grammatical errors in each chapter, but that can be corrected. also, if the narrative goes in the third person it should be in the third person and if it jumps towards the first person it must be done carefully. a smooth transition is important good luck !!
This novel is good, but it is hard to give a review just by four chapters. An author should improve himself in romance to write better romance on his novel
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So far, I found this book wonderful, exciting, with a story of overcoming, with a hot footprint and a bit of mystery, very captivating from the discretion to the chapters it has now. I recommend you to read this book, you will not regret for giving a chance. Good work!
Okay, the title was captivating and intriguing to me since it was talking about the past. I like how you write and intrigued the readers from the way you portray your synopsis in a little much overview of what will happen. The shadows must be revealed according to your plotline and best of luck, author!
Still on chapter 3, but so far I'm loving it. The characters are entertaining! Cute!!!! I agree with Patricio. Leonora is cute. I'm going to live Lucio. A lot. I recommend this book 👏
Keep it up!!! This good, a few mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed. Go, girl!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I love the synopsis and the whole plot... I'm here praying for Leon and Tricio be together....I added to my library and waiting for the next chapters. Keep it up😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
So far I’m loving the book. Well put plot and I love the fact that she’s a strong female lead. Keep up with the good work!!! I can’t wait to see how Leonora and Patricio relationship will be like. I added the book on m library to keep reading! 😍😍😍😍🔥