Unwanted Feelings
There was a time when he was my everything. Back when loving him was my source of rebellion. But, that was then and this is now. I have taken a new path. My freedom now comes first. Yet, my parents still used my past transgression to judge me.
As punishment for my rebellious decisions, I was sent to a new University in my native town. A new, yet, the same hell I had tried to escape.
However, this was my opportunity to redeem myself. The gods were even on my side when a mystery arises. Solving it would surely get me what I wanted. But, there was one problem: he was there. How can I ever achieve my goal and keep my hands to myself? Determination.
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Secrets. Everyone has them, and Kyle is not an exception. He hugs his and shows the world a camouflage of who he wants. However, like always secrets are meant to come to life. And, what a sweet, misery it will be for him when his does.
Life in Redwood will never be the same.
Contains Involves explicit Violence, Explicit Language, and Sexual Scenes.
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The world-building in this story is just mind-blowing. I can visualize everything that is taking place yet still feel at ease with the storyline. I like that. Not many people can do it so keep up the good work.[img=coins]
I love where the story is going. Brianna is an amazing character. I'm in love with her. I can't wait to see what happens between she and Kyle. Love it!
I love where the book is going.cant wait to see what happens with Brianna and kyle.to me Kyle seem like a villan please up date.the story is really interesting
This is an amazing book. The flow is wonderful and the characters are well thought of .It is the type of book that I would read again and again.
I will start from the beginning ;) The title is really great! (unusual at Webnovel ;)) The cover page - stunning! I would only change the place of the title and the font, because the whole composition is a bit disturbed. The story is nicely written! The plot is interesting, the characters also. Don't worry about minor mistakes. Every serious writer has an editor who deals with the correctness of the text, etc. and we do everything ourselves... ;) You're doing very well!
It feels like am in your book to be honest, I like your writing styles.... Your unique in our own way, a few errors are here and dear but I get the fact that no one is perfect. Am proud of you🤗🤗🤗
In terms of the story overall, stupendous ! While the concept of vampires has spanned countless lifetimes, this is one that gives the characters and the world— life. Speaking of characters, I found Dianna to be equivalent to freedom, so much so that it is blinding, and I enjoy her minute movements and the hints of comedy in here. There were a few issues about run-on sentences or the occasional verb misspellings, but this did not hamper my reading at all. So I will keep this at 5 stars for writing quality ! All in all, a polished gem that will hit fame sooner or later, so keep up the good work, Author !
I love where the story is going. Brianna is an amazing character. I'm in love with her. I can't wait to see what happens between she and Kyle. Love it!
A five star story for me! Brilliantly written, perfectly descriptive. The characters are so realistically made. The plot's flow is smooth. The story comes to life with the authors writing. Kudos to the author for this amazing work.
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Honestly, I only read the first paragraph and I was very intrigued. I mean, it had action in the book so quick! I love it already! [img=recommend]
I love book. It's fresh and different. The gramma is also wonderful. I can tell the writer took her time with this novel for her readers. Keep it up!
At first, I was confused because I did not pay attention very well, but when I try to reread it, I understand it more clearly. Since you are a new author, please don't up what you're doing and keep going, Author!
The novel itself is extremely great at describing what each society has, and watching how Brianna's story in this extremely complicated world is very good. I hope the author continues to update this and expand on the story! ^_^ from ryder