Star Wars: Revelations(dropped)

The book is really well written and the characters are pretty good too. I'm just scared that the author hasn't uploaded a new chapter in a week... I hope he hasn't dropped the book

I really enjoyed this novel and hope someone else picks it up ..................................................... . . ..............

perfect keep doing what you doing.............................................................................................................

I really like this fic so far. It's rushed but not in a boring way. there is character development still and it keeps me entertained. I would think reading about his training would be nice but you time skip it so well I don't think it is needed.

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Interesting.

Writing Quality - 3: Could be a lot better I suppose Stability of Updates - 3: Can't know so I give middle score here. Story Development - 1 : Copied 2 fanfics showing little to no original intention of providing something different. Character Design -1: Kind of weird, doesn't make sense. The 1 chapter I read (1) showed me that this MC is poorly written and doesn't react as logical as we think, taking his own death and the talk with god with no explanation whatsoever like "oh well" with no background of why he could react that way. World Background - 5: Star Wars. Just mentioning the world we can picture the situations without much description, making it easier to write a fiction. One of the best worlds out there. Dropped at chapter 1 when I realized author copied 2 fanfics. My opinion is heavily biased on that fact, by all means read before you formulate your own opinion. I will be not reading this.

like it.

Great read please do not drop and plz update Transformer Evolition. .

This book is great give it a shot before you bash it!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

I liked it. The chracters whare good. Story keeped my attention. The environment was described grate. I hope You update soon. Thank you for grate work.

Great Story!Keep going!..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Only complain I have is that the chapters seem a little short but that may because of the writing style. Other than that no complaints. It actually fixed one of the major problems with system stories which is state spamming and diving into to much detail.

its really great but but what id like if he's parents would have survived the attack but went into hiding and are building up a secret army to get back at his uncle or something Similar to that and it make for an interesting thing and another thing is if his parents also had the Mets force as well mean its inherited