Demonic Devourer's Development

You, reader, must look at my story and think: "Hmm, this looks just like a bazillion of other stories where MC reincarnates into some monster with a system and/or a cheat". And what will I say to you in reply? Yes, on the surface, it is. But! It is my duty as a writer to avoid, at least conciously, all cliches that I could. To play with tropes, think up original ideas and so on and so on. Or maybe you don't care for originality too much. Many don't. Well, one way or another, I hope you will give it a try >:3

A tasty blend of many popular flavors, in a crispy delicious shell with the right amount of crunch, but not too much crunch. Too many numbers really overwhelm the palate, and are best carefully managed like the right amount of salt. Eat your vegetables, boys and girls, Voren certainly does, and he gets big and strong thanks to it!

Came here looking for copper and struck gold. In terms of story and plot, it does add its own unique twist to the whole monster with a system trope, which only adds to its entertaining factor. What really stands out however is the writing quality as it is extremely easy to simply flow through the chapters mindlessly lost in the story. Grammatical mistakes are almost non-existent and story development is quick. In terms of character, readers come face to face with a raging monster that simply wished to enjoy a better life, something all of us can relate to, and was denied that possibility. So I implore readers to sit down, get comfy and follow mc's journey.

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Interesting start, can't wait for more. Here's to hoping you'll win the WPC. . .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ..

The premise would have been interesting until I saw the harem tag. .

read for your self to find out ...... I have nothing to say .... just my rating is enough to say what I want😆.................. and how I feel about the story

So far so good, it's a weak to strong story but with an interesting twist. I'm looking forward to future chapters. ...........................

An interesting concept with a bit of a twist. A demon starting at the bottom of the food chain. Well, if that isn't worth reading, then I don't know what is! Give it a try :)

it was great untie pest came along after that it was a complete downfall for me .................................................................................

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author. Story Development: This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted. Character Design: An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him. I am curious how he might change throughout the Story. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him. Summary: Cute apex preditor snail is cute.

Awesome read. Blended with just the right amount of evil, humour, and well founded logic. Sprinkled with a dash of grotesqueness at the top along with the garnishing of spicy plots. And served hot with the pickle of intriguing world development. A smooth read for those want to ease into the EvilMC genre. The only regret I have is that the narration is in first person, which makes me less immersive in the storyline than I want to be. But it might not be a problem for many potential readers out there. My point is, you should definitely give this work a try. Wishing my best to the author.