Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses

Fantasy376 Chapters2.7M Views
Author: Darkness_Enjoyer
4.06
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Do I really have to treat the heroines of the story well, even if they hate me?

Do I really have to avoid the villainess even if they are the ones who accept me?

This is the story of a young man trapped in the world of the erotic game he played as the weakest and most hated villain of the game.

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Chapter lengths are 1000-2000 words.

Two chapters every day.

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Ornoth
Ornoth

The story has potential. Unfortunately the Author doesn't know how to unearth that. It has way too many inconsistencies it's getting annoying.

2 years ago
54
Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_Enjoyer

Hello! Honest review from the Author. -->Grammar (4/5) There are a lot of mistakes to point out in my grammar. Be it using idioms wrong places or using the same words over and over again. This is rather related to the fact that I don't have much time to write my novel and proofread it thanks to the college I am attending. ( I spend 40 minutes on each chapter only.) I don't believe that my grammar is so poor that it renders my book unreadable. I believe that I have maintained a sufficient level of grammar to make it readable. --> Updates (5/5) There is nothing much to say. Unless something extreme happens like an exam that takes 4 hours straight, I post two chapters every day. --> Story development (4/5) The pacing of my novel may not be to everyone's taste, as it includes a lot of monologues from the main character and occasional POV changes. This can result in a slower pace than some readers may anticipate. However, I believe it still has value and encourages readers to give it a chance. In my opinion, the story isn't terrible and it doesn't necessarily make one feel bored. However, it may not be the most captivating read available. -->Character Design (4/5) I believe that my portrayal of the main cast in the game was inadequate and poorly executed, resulting in a loss of one point. Nonetheless, I also believe that the other characters possess unique qualities that differentiate them from one another. --> World Background (5/5) I believe I have created a well-crafted world with a rich background, incorporating diverse elements. However, I understand that some readers may find it ambitious. One of the strongest aspects of my novel is its foundation, particularly the well-executed RPG elements. --> Romance (4/5) Although not subject to star ratings, it is imperative to address the aspect of my portrayal of female characters in the game. I take great pride in avoiding the common trope of presenting them as mere sexual objects for the main character. These females are strong and independent, playing pivotal roles in shaping the narrative. They are integral parts of the story, not just decorative accessories. Despite having had several relationships, I have never experienced the feeling of falling in love with another person thus far. Therefore, this part may be a bit dull, and I can't do much about it since it basically stems from my personality. Hope this review helps.

a year ago
19
Darkness_Enjoyer
Darkness_Enjoyer

You can treat this part as the Q-A. I will try to answer all the questions that readers want to ask, in this part, under this thread. You can ask things about what the story is about, how many female leads this novel has... I will try to answer them all.

a year ago
8
Sfenky
Sfenky

The story feels like unrealistic. Like the way the characters behave feels idiotic. There are some concepts where its copied from other novels and sadly the author didnt really try to make them original.

2 years ago
42
Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_Solomon

I don't plan to insult or offend anyone :) The plot has a good start (chapter 1 to 5). Then it gets boring and stupid the further you go, I go from an interesting concept to something boring and monotonous. The characters feel hyper stupid as if they were NPCs instead of people, and of course since everyone feels stupid the mc will seem "intelligent" but he only does and points out obese and normal things. The system or ia is there, without a sense of existence, it could easily be a screen without communication and it would have the same effect.

2 years ago
38
T_O_K_Y_O
T_O_K_Y_O

At first I like the story but as the story progressing the other characters keeps annoying to the point its childish like MC didn't do anything but they kept bothering him bruh I though they were nobles especially those hero tropes I expect them to be a little mature more to be 12 years old especially being a high nobility and also I want to see more MC using his knowledge on the game like going to the other place to get that items/skills and many more and lastly maybe MC can steal those heroines that didn't met yet by the hero instead of having a prejudices about mc at first sight and fawning already at the hero at first glance because of hero charms or worlds will and that's it ty.

2 years ago
16
Untuk_Main
Untuk_Main

None of the character are likeable.

2 years ago
15
ReficulsRegret
ReficulsRegret

The author doesn't know how to write scenes when it's supposed to be tense, it isn't, etc. I almost forgot there was a system in this novel and the purpose of said system has the fan-favorite sealed effect, rank 1 mage sealed, charisma 7 sealed Started off well but went downhill fast and there isn't a reason to mention the intelligence of the characters including the mc after all the character can only have the same intelligence as the author

2 years ago
14
MangetsuTH
MangetsuTH

Plus with plus doesn't equal less, how does a fusion of two different people feel like less than one person? This main character is empty, i can't sympathize with or even hate him, i does't feel nothin for him and this is worst that hating him, and if i can't care about him this story stop making sence for me. The first iteraction with the suposed MC (before the fusion) felt like a charecter that i could be atached, but now i can't say that much. Those are my fealings about this story, i wish this was diferent but...

2 years ago
14
Mohor_Ganguly
Mohor_Ganguly

Very bad of a novel . there is nothing interesting going on , reading upto the academic arc feels like a chore. Author filled like almost 100 chapters full of filler chapter and the training arc is made so long that even dead skeletons will revive when we get to see MC first starts taking revenge on any Heroines.

a year ago
13
Cat_Tip
Cat_Tip

Cough it’s a novel with promise if it wasn’t for the author completely botching words every couple of sentences and mixing powers and traits.

2 years ago
11
slimy_Boi
slimy_Boi

so far so good (chapter 4). But can you guys recommend some similar stuff like this with MC being the Villain.

2 years ago
8
Cupio
Cupio

So I read up to when the free chapters end. So chapter 29. The writer spends most of the chapters explaining stuff over and over. The writer is also too wordy, instead of just saying something simple like "the mc experimented and learned how to use magic the first time while trying stuff from his old life." He uses a bunch of paragraphs to do it. Is he padding chapters? Learning how to write? I do want to say that I understand at the beginning of a story you have to introduce the world. It just went on all the free chapters. Do it quicker. It is not a story I will be continuing. It started to feel like a chore to read, so just not to my taste. Hopefully, the writer will improve later on. A side note, I'm new to the story and there are already over 100 chapters. I don't know the stability of updates. So 4 stars for that.

2 years ago
5
Shiroyukihime
Shiroyukihime

very uninteresting and very bad read experience , most of the chapters feels like fillers. Nothing short of revenge are in like 100 chapters. MC seems like a beta. Instead of focusing on the main heroines and the main plot MC goes away to get other girls.

a year ago
5
Daoist8AFXRt
Daoist8AFXRt

I won't say it is bad but it is not good either I guess...too much info less action ..way too much info about everything you are explaining everything in detail literally though it may be good for some part but not for all...for me all 40 chaps felt like info ....I hope you will give some cool stuff for us read in coming chaps ...👍all the best

2 years ago
4