Universal Veracity
In a futuristic Earth where space exploration has become possible, a young girl dreams of becoming the greatest scientist in the world. However, her world is threatened by an unknown enemy, causing her to become fearful but determined to defend her planet.
One unique aspect of this girl is that she is able to find research answers in her sleep, which initially seems like a lucky coincidence. However, as she rapidly develops new technologies, she begins to question why she is able to do this and realizes that there may be something strange about her abilities.
To uncover the truth behind her unusual powers, she sets her sights on becoming the greatest scientist in the entire universe. Along the way, she will encounter many challenges and must confront her fears to save her world from destruction.
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This is my first time writing a novel, english is not my main language, so if you have some advices, i will be happy to hear it.
This is a hard read, past tense used were future tense should be, the naming, sentence structure, the working in of exposition. I think the story could have a lot of potential, but it is in serious need of an editor.
I love futuristic worlds, for now i like it. Since english is not your main languages, you have very few grammatical error. Overall i love it
There are a lot of improvements that can be made. Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are the most essential things to look at as these are will influence your readers. The next one is writing style. I would suggest, write shorter paragraphs to facilitate our mobile readers. Lengthy paragraph would reduce the attention span. Avoid repetitive words within the same sentence or the next one after it. For the storyline, I leave it to the author's good imagination. It is always great to write futuristic novel. Hope you will improve further! Rooting for you! Good luck!