Heatherland.

The story was interesting. It reminds me of my all time favorite Chibi and Armor Brotherhood, if you know what I'm saying. Hahaha. Anyway, the writing style and quality is good but it gets a little bit confusing when it gets to dialogue. Only a little okay? The story development wasn't there yet but it's actually nice that the author takes his time to give development to the two MCs. The world background or the world setting of the story give me quite a surprise. It's quite different from what I initially thought when I saw the book cover and when I read the synopsis. Overall this book has so much potential.

I randomly bumped into this novel, it's great and the characters are memorable and I grew attachment with each of them. It is as if they are real. Great work author

I like that the book is mostly dialogue driven to keep the plot moving forward. The closeness of the two main characters is more friendship than brotherly; which I believe is a stronger bond (chosen family and all). I also love the differences in their personalities with one being more happy go lucky and the other the worrier. Good book thus far.

The primary characters in this novel are emotional. The world and issues they face make this book worth reading. I love Micah and Peter's closeness. Due to the rare two major characters, the plot is intriguing. The plot progresses well, but not too fast. Overall, the author writes well and has promise.

The main characters in this story are written to be packed with emotion, the world they inhabit and the conflicts they face are well worth giving this book a read!

Loving the brotherhood bond between Micah and Peter. The plot is interesting since rare is the times when we see two protagonist. Plot progression/pacing is good not too fast. Overall huge amount of potential and the author's writing is also good

I am glad I came across this book! It has an amazing storyline and the characters are just wonderfully explained. Each one has a different characteristic that makes them even more outstanding. I read along the lines and could feel myself in the story. Amazing work!

The author's ability to draw me in with just one chapter speaks volumes about their storytelling prowess, and I'm genuinely excited to embark on this literary journey. Keep it up.

I think one of you're strengths of this novel is its well-developed characters. But The pacing of the novel is a concern. While there are moments of action, they are often overshadowed by long stretches of exposition and unnecessary details. This imbalance hampers the flow of the story and makes it difficult to maintain interest. Also the writing style could benefit from further refinement. The prose is often clunky and lacks finesse, hindering the overall reading experience.try to fix that

IM HERE FOR 5 STARS! BECAUSE I WANTED IT SO DON'T ASK ME WHY IM HERE Good story, interesting story, good world background, good design character, love your writing skill is so beautiful

I saw and went through the book a lot. It is a brilliant story with a good plot and fantastic adventure. The two out how they go on their journey and fight battles, It is all amazing. As for the world it is purely polished to understand everything and the writing style is easily flowing Good book and I will keep up with it.

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Although the synopsis is not really clear, I was surprised by how well written the novel is! It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds naturally. I took liking in Micah, he is truly a well written character! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!

'Heatherland' captivates with its Eastern Fantasy tale, following princes Peter and Micah through self-discovery. The orphanage setting adds depth, exploring friendship and challenging authority. Engaging narrative and vivid descriptions make it a promising read, leaving me eager for more."