The Archmagi of Technology

It’s your average dc system story. Not really much to say the writing quality is decent. The story tho is just like every other dc or marvel fic with the mc ending up joining Batman them. The mc is nothing special either nothing about him will really make you want to read it.

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The Mc is dumb, act like a child and the system act like a spoiled kid it's insufferable.

Same ole story. DIE, get a snarky system, and run into Batman immediately.

(At 32) I do like the story. But I am not sure about future harem. If it became a Pokémon story this going to suck so that's it. ,........................

What did you expect of course I would have a biased review. I hope you guys enjoy my story I welcome all helpful feedback. Don't be a keyboard warrior

la esencia de la historia es una joya, pero autor tienes mucha prisa y no tienes camino para correr, se siente muy forzado todo con un montón de agujeros de trama. creo que si tomas tiempo para planificar la historia un poco más lento, más desarrollado, más creíble? creo que sería un absoluto éxito... saludos y gracias

i hope the story continues for 300 chapters or more .[img=update] it would be nice if there was a little Slice of life with Raven and other characters instead of always Training and Planning in the future

I like it till now (chap. 15) so yeah try reading it too maby you will like it

A aparência do protagonista e a mesma da capa ? Ser sim então por que diz que ele e bronzeado ? Does the protagonist's appearance look the same as on the cover? If so, then why does it say he's tanned?

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Cara por enquanto esta otimo, o nivel de poder do MC ta subindo rapido mas é a DC, o sistema e bom ta la so para ajudar o MC nao transforma ele em um escravo

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