The Archmagi of Technology

It’s your average dc system story. Not really much to say the writing quality is decent. The story tho is just like every other dc or marvel fic with the mc ending up joining Batman them. The mc is nothing special either nothing about him will really make you want to read it.

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The Mc is dumb, act like a child and the system act like a spoiled kid it's insufferable.

Same ole story. DIE, get a snarky system, and run into Batman immediately.

(At 32) I do like the story. But I am not sure about future harem. If it became a Pokémon story this going to suck so that's it. ,........................

What did you expect of course I would have a biased review. I hope you guys enjoy my story I welcome all helpful feedback. Don't be a keyboard warrior

bad, I don't recommend it... author then wrote his wishes on a pile of paper and thought it was a fanfic and threw it here... protagonist doesn't have a normal personality (it's incoherent most of the time) the characters are built exactly the same way , has no personality of its own, so a lot of mob. without consistency, without character construction, for some reason the character's ego is extremely high, the A.I. is clueless and so it serves to be "Deus ex Máquina" where it converts everything to the protagonist and you can already see that the romance is non-existent. ..

i hope the story continues for 300 chapters or more .[img=update] it would be nice if there was a little Slice of life with Raven and other characters instead of always Training and Planning in the future

la esencia de la historia es una joya, pero autor tienes mucha prisa y no tienes camino para correr, se siente muy forzado todo con un montón de agujeros de trama. creo que si tomas tiempo para planificar la historia un poco más lento, más desarrollado, más creíble? creo que sería un absoluto éxito... saludos y gracias

I like it till now (chap. 15) so yeah try reading it too maby you will like it

A aparência do protagonista e a mesma da capa ? Ser sim então por que diz que ele e bronzeado ? Does the protagonist's appearance look the same as on the cover? If so, then why does it say he's tanned?

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Very boring book all the characters including the MC have no personality they come off very bland and kinda dumb. (Very sad for a DC fanfic) The MC relies on the system to do everything and when he learns something on his own the system praises him claiming he is a super genius which is definitely not true. Writing quality is subpar with multiple sentences each chapters that don’t make sense. This is also one of those books where the Original DC characters are dumbed down and accepting of things they wouldn’t be otherwise.

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