Primordial System

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Author: Damass13
4.34
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Story of a orphan girl after death, Read as she reincarnates in a world of cultivation and has a system with her to cheat her way through.

(First story I’ve ever written if you guys have any feedback good or bad please leave it in the comments to improve my future writing.)

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Dragon_Winchester
Dragon_Winchester

I am the exp of my God King Sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

5 years ago
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Tsubasa93
Tsubasa93

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pan39
pan39

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5 years ago
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Damass13
Damass13

Hello Author here just posting to get peoples feedback please reply under this review if you have any tips or things you’d like me to improve. Thanks P.S.Shameless Rating but you know the Grind so just got to do it.

5 years ago
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zZCandyZz
zZCandyZz

Thk for updating. Pls update soon T-T!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

5 years ago
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Peryite
Peryite

Why haven’t you updated 😭 its been a year.................................................................................................. This is a good noval!

3 years ago
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reboot23
reboot23

this novel seriously needs to be rewritten. Everything except the character design and story development is actual crap mostly the writing quality, I had to stop for couple seconds to figure out what l just read. At the start of the novel has absolutely no logic, l mean how the hell can a blind person be a surgeon. .come on man if your going to write a novel ..do it properly. I don't know much about the update stability but so far l think it's fine.

3 years ago
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Grimace
Grimace

Read Tsubasa93's review! also, I'm pretty sure this story has been dropped. Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space-Filling up space

4 years ago
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Shy_Guy_01
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4 years ago
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novels1994
novels1994

Great novel! Great story! Hope you continue writing it its better than most ive read so far keep up the great work authur-san.

4 years ago
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AreUSirius
AreUSirius

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4 years ago
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AreUSirius
AreUSirius

Good novel with a couple of grammatical errors but besides that it’s great! Get past the first few chapters and the pacing of the story will get better you don’t see many yuri cultivation novels let alone ones that have a harem in them which I find refreshing. (Not a serious cultivation novel but still has an in-depth cultivation world though it isn’t the highlight of the story)

4 years ago
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