The First Forefather
Author: LMoodie
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The great universe holds unlimited power, the divine sects, the immortal families, the lords of reincarnation.
Above all are the two realms of the beyond, each ruled by an Eternal Emperors, yet new power will emerge, as it always does.
Follow Huang Yang, an unparalleled genius, who is adopted into a small family. See him rise and fall as he advances towards his origin and goal of reshaping the universe in his own image.
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I really like it already, and hope that he keeps updating it. The writing quality is nice and I enjoy the eastern fantasy genre. The biggest problem is the lack of chapters.
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Up to Chapter 8 so far. For this site the writing style and grammar is excellent, though please try to learn some more descriptive words. If I have to keep seeing the word talent I'm going to flip. Please capitalise the levels and realms of cultivation and martial arts, helps the story flow better and gives us and understanding of what's what. Overall so far it's a decent story that looks like it might be a good one to keep up with. Still new so no comments on update speed. Good job Author
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Shameless review from the author here. This is my first time writing, and I wanted to give a heads up about what's to come in the story, along with my general ideas. The mc is from unknown origins, who quickly shows his talent. The story doesn't start off with him being the adoptive child to a family that hates him, but with internal conflict, where he feels love and hate. He will then rise and fall, but continue to carry his family up to a higher status. His personality will change through different experiences, while he meets friends and enemies. This is not a harem novel, but I will do my best with the romance aspect that I have in mind. While he will meet stronger talents, they will not continue to appear in the same age with stronger cultivation. The higher realms require knowledge and understanding, which generally comes with age. Please tell me your thoughts and I will try to continue writing.