it was a Good Start i was Initially Excited for a Human fic since he Started as that and Since his Prodigious Nature he would Get Strong Quick but as Soon as he turned in a Saiyan it Sort of became Boring Sorry Man the Story is not for me.
5 months ago
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TheSilentBoyCries
Shameless review also new chap comingbout tomorrow
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4 years ago
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eroskun
It was hard to read.
The mc is plain stupid, spends most time of the story building air castles fantasizing. The story describe him op while in reality he's not even stronger than a Nappa.
Species speak their own language and can't speak the common language at all, when in reality all 12 universes speak the common language.
So many things for this to be bad story
it was a Good Start i was Initially Excited for a Human fic since he Started as that and Since his Prodigious Nature he would Get Strong Quick but as Soon as he turned in a Saiyan it Sort of became Boring Sorry Man the Story is not for me.
Shameless review also new chap comingbout tomorrow ............................................................ xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
It was hard to read. The mc is plain stupid, spends most time of the story building air castles fantasizing. The story describe him op while in reality he's not even stronger than a Nappa. Species speak their own language and can't speak the common language at all, when in reality all 12 universes speak the common language. So many things for this to be bad story