Vampire Chronicles
Year 1540
Nicole is a lowly human from the mainland trying to make ends meet as she would often paint for middle and high-class people sometimes even Purebloods which was rare in her case. She receives little money which doesn’t financially support her living. Until one day she received an invitation from the Snow Kingdom to paint the great Lord Jasper Gervassius. She reaches the kingdom and Meets Lord Jasper in the hopes of making a big income she receives more than what she bargains for.
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Jasper placed both of his hands on either side of Nicole's head trapping her with his body. He stared down at her looking at his sweet innocent lamb, he couldn't help but smile at her widely. Her doe-like eyes staring back at him only made him want to devour her "Why do you play these games with me darling you know I don't like it. I think you forgot who you're dealing with." He leaned down against her lips slightly flicking his tongue in her mouth making her crave for more."My Quahneah Woman"
Nicole gasped in shock as she wondered how he knew her tribe's name. Before she could say another Jasper had cupped her cheek softly placing his lips on hers and kissing her softly as he slowly removed his hands against the wall.
He was wrapping his arms around her waist bringing her body closer to his as there was no space between them. As they continued Nicole started to become breathless pulling herself back to breathe, she couldn't help but look up to see Jasper looking at her with a smile that was Duchenne. His purple orbs looked into her seeing the love and adorn affection he was showing her.
"Jasper I have a question to ask you" Jasper hummed waiting for her question" What are we going to do about the tirade ."
Jasper's smile suddenly became sinister as he narrowed his eyes "Why don't you leave that to me, darling."
Hello everyone! I know your probably wondering where the heck is the rest of the chapters. Don’t worry I’ll posting chapters all this week . I had to finish up exams as it is important 👍 thank you all for the patience ❤️
Wow, amazing writing quality. Was hooked from the start. Definitely recommended! Too few chapters tho. [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
That was really well written by you. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Even i write. Do check it out its's called My Husband Is The Demon King
For a long time the romantic touch that always transcends vampires has been forgotten, you only have to read the original Dracula to see it, but lately only powers, darkness, and the classic antihero appeared in the novels. Very revitalizing, giving readers back what they had lost: fantasy, power, mystery and romance.
Im excited to keep reading this. Hopefully the chapters keep on coming!!!
"Vampire Chronicles" captivates with its enthralling blend of fantasy and romance, presenting a story that hooks readers from the outset. Central to its charm are the protagonists, Nicolle and Jasper, whose complex relationship navigates the treacherous yet mesmerizing world the author has crafted. The narrative thrives on its character depth, engaging plot, and the palpable tension between darkness and light, making it a standout read in the vampire romance genre. While the novel occasionally stumbles with grammatical errors and pacing, these minor issues do not detract from the overall enjoyment. The story is rich with suspense and mystery, skillfully unfolding in a way that keeps readers eagerly turning pages. In essence, "Vampire Chronicles" is a compelling journey into a world where love battles against the backdrop of darkness. It's a must-read for those drawn to stories of love, redemption, and the supernatural, offering a fresh take that is both immersive and memorable.
Please keep writing and don’t abandon this story. I like your chars personalities and the world but need more!!! LOL
I love all the author books! I miss the older version of this book before it was replaced with this one. I can say that this version of the book is way better than the previous one. With a bit of work with the grammar which can always be improved. I love this story so much :D As a fellow reader please check out the other books that the author has.
Lost myself in the enchanting world of the Vampire Chronicles. The blend of fantasy and romance is beautifully woven, making it an irresistible read for any fan of the genre. [img=recommend]
As a fan of vampires, I immediately began reading your book after finding the link on your profile. Although it has only eight chapters out, I wanted to share my thoughts with you. When it comes to the writing quality, I gave you 4 stars due to seeing various mistakes and a few poorly constructed sentences that sometimes made no sense. I would recommend breaking up some of them to improve the clarity of your story so your readers can better imagine what you want them to imagine. As for the stability of updates, I am unsure as I only discovered the novel half an hour ago and read all the chapters in one sitting. However, assuming you release them daily, I gave you a 5-star for that. The story development is well done and quite engaging, drawing you in from the first chapter. The character design is also impressive, with Nicolle being portrayed as a kind-hearted but self-deprecating girl, while Jasper is a sinister yet complex character with his vampiric nature. Regarding the world background, I can't say much as only a few locations have been presented so far. Nonetheless, if the Author continues, I believe there will be many more places to imagine. In conclusion, I would give your book a rating of 4.8 out of 5.0 stars. It's a great story, with well-developed characters and an interesting plot. It had me hooked from the start, and all the time reading it, I was unable to put it down like a Vampire is unable to pull away from the neck of a gorgeous and tasty woman. I highly recommend others give it a chance and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work, Author! And for those who are stuck to the end, what are you waiting for? Join Nicolle on her way to conquer the heart of the sinister yet romantic Vampire, Jasper Snow. Peace~
Props to the cover, it looks great! Who doesn't a forbidden romance? Read Vampire Chronicles and you'll found yourself falling in love with the fl and ml.
Your novel is truly enjoyable, and I adore your writing style. The way you've described both the background and the characters really drew me into the story. The characters are well-crafted, though the story's pace, while decent, could be improved
"Vampire Chronicles is a unique and intriguing novel, that keeps you hooked from start to finish. There's something about it that's just captivating. Definitely worth checking out!" just 3 chaps in and The story has a great potential
okay, I will say this your writing is really good, but if you could please try to increase the size of the chapters and if you could try to break the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs to increase the readability, the flow of writing is going smoothly.
Your story is very unique and it is something that I have never encountered before. I'm really intrigued on how your story would go and what kind of development your characters will have. Keep working hard and upload more chapters.