The Unseen Angel in MHA

Love interest.

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Honestly this was a great story, developed well, unique MC, and awesome powers. grammar was decent as well. the story takes a turn when the author decides to go with the hands down most cliche move you can make. Killing off the family. it wasn't written well, The MC suddenly became useless, and it was seen from a mile away. It's truly sad the author had to resort to this instead of finding something else to create the emotional impact needed. Killing off his friends for example. but no. had to go with the WN's favorite go to tragedy. Not that the story is bad after, its just, a story written so well ends up making this move is heart breaking and leaves a stain that can't be removed going forward. Hopefully the rest of the story turns out for the better, id still give it a chance if I were someone looking to give this a read but if you're looking for something special then this just isn't it.

this just might be the best MHA fanfic I've ever read and the only thing that could make this better is if there was no romance

I read through chapter 19, and I plan on continuing. I highly enjoy this story. You don't see many MHA fanfics that start way before UA high. But I think this type of story is considered niche due to the pacing and nonviolence involved in the beginning chapters. I like the idea of an archangel/seraphim quirk. It's unique and different. The author does a fantastic job of creating an image of the setting. The overall story is generally wholesome. A major issue I saw, and continue to see in many novels, are expressions and body movement. "Rolling my eyes, nodding in agreement, chuckling," etc. This novel, in particular, uses these about 5-8 times per chapter. It's too repetitive, and it's considered a bad writing habit. There are so many other ways to convey the feelings of your characters. I also don't particularly like any of the characters. I didn't see much individuality, but more like copy-and-paste personalities. Their uniqueness comes from their quirks, and that's it. Maybe it's better later on, and I will find out. Overall, I'd give this a 3.8/5.

overall the story seemed good but the characters didn't feel real, the whole family died but I didn't feel a thing, it was like it was necessary for the MC to become a emo and chase power unconditionally.Even if it was a tragedy I didn't feel sad for the MC and killing the whole family seemed unnecessary

what type of angel like one from dxd or from the bible or like from soem other anime

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Firstly, The story is written really well and I notice little to no grammar mistakes. Updates come regularly usually everyday or other day so pretty frequent. Now this MC isn’t like other MCs in MHA fanfics mainly because he doesn’t know the plot nor is he reincarnated. A lot of people say his family getting killed was to make him emo or he was nerfed when it happen clearly didn’t read the story. Story develops well and everything is done in a way that make sense as long as you actually read it through instead of letting your biased decision make the review for you. It’s simple this story isn’t for some people. Imo the character was done really well I don’t know why people wasn’t expecting a kid to actually be a kid. Again it’s not like he’s reincarnated or knows the plot and tragedy is in a lot of fics just stop reading if you don’t like it no point in leaving a bad review over a biased mindset. World background is well done and we see a angle of MHA that we don’t normally see in MHA fanfics. A lot of negative reviews are seriously biased imo. I’m not saying it’s the best but imo it’s really good and deserves way more recognition. P.S All Might fanboys can EAD

I personally loved the book and how it went. in fact, i didn't notice that little crossover the author did until towards the end, and I got to say, "That was smooth, brother!" one can see the progress of the writing as at the beginning the book had a few miffs here and there but really the book had a good pace and a well thought out background and characters. people could find that boring, but that actually gives the story weight and depth. All in all, the author did amazing work with the story once again. Great work 👏

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Best MHA fan-fic i ever read. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

5 star, all the wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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