His Exiled Luna
At that fateful engagement banquet, I thought I was destined to become the future Luna, hand in hand with the heir of the strongest pack in the South, the one I’d been promised to since childhood. But the brutal truth shattered my dreams: in front of everyone, my fiancé declared he’d found his true mate, and I was just a "vile person" he would never accept.
Beaten and exiled, my life lay in ruins. Just when I believed I had no way out and was doomed to become a Rogue, fate had a shocking twist in store. The Rogue King—a man feared like a mafia don—pulled me into his embrace the moment he laid eyes on me, whispering “mate” in a voice that sent shivers down my spine. In a world where power and betrayal rule, my destiny is about to take a dark and thrilling turn.
His Exiled Luna is created by Ankey Klein, an eGlobal Creative Publishing signed author.
After 13 chapters, the characters begin behaving and speaking in extremely unexpected ways, talking about events that never happened while also forgetting events that did happen. I'm almost certain that the author has two different versions of the same novel, with critical differences in the events of the plot between the two, and has mistakenly mixed up chapters of the two together. The story was going well at first, although the chemistry between the two main characters was lacking. But I initially dismissed it as just awkward writing. But after reading the 14th and 15th chapter, nothing made sense anymore and the attraction between the two felt more forced than ever. On the bright side, the way the author narrates the environment, the mood, and the thoughts and feelings of the characters is extremely good. I just hope that whatever made the characters begin behaving oddly and speaking in very self-contradictory ways gets resolved. The fact that nearly everything that happened during the first chapters is contradicted in a single dialogue in the 14th chapter leads me to believe that a huge mixup must have happened. The inconsistency is hard to overlook. I truly was enjoying the story but it just took such a sudden nosedive that I can't justify continuing to read it. Good luck, author.