I-it appeared out of nowhere. People started eating and attacking each other in a zombie like craze! Throwing all of Pelican Soar Academy into a bloody place filled with screams of agony and chaos.
I saw Best friends betray each other at the drop of a hat.
I witnessed teachers sacrifice their own students just to save themselves!
...Has man's true nature finally show itself after hiding all this time? And if so, then who's the real monster?
Well, either way, whether it's people or those monsters, I will protect everything that's precious to me and survive.
Even if I become a monster in the process.
-Desmond Mori
Not bad. Keep it up. Plenty of people will read it soon, so don't stop. ________________________________________ I like it, has the 'high school of the dead' vibe going, but obviously its heading in a different direction. ________________________________________ I give you a thumbs up. d(* ̄o ̄) ________________________________________ I totally recommend it. ___________________________________________________________☆☆☆______________________________________________________________♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡___ ~Happy Apocalypse Writing fellow Author. (*>v<)ゞ*゜+5
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Wassup, fellow readers and author! How you guys doing? Great I hope, especially when you read this book! Not to toot my own horn but I like to think of my story as one of the most original zombie apocalypse stories out there. There will be funny moments as well as sad and emotional ones (well, that's how I envision it). Anyways, I'd appreciate it if you give me your opinion about the story. Of course I prefer positive ones but I'm up for negative criticism as well. Just don't make it too harsh (the author is a hot headed teenager after all)
ok, i'll write an honest review since i catch up to the last chapter now (ch. 69) and is waiting for an update. i don't usually write a review but since i like the story and want to help the write to improve his/her writing then i'll leave my honest review here. please note that this is based on my opinion so you're free to agree or disagree. first, i want to say that i really like how the author change the POV between characters. that was creative and refreshing. the author is also really good at pacing the story and the characters is.. well, stay true to their character. i like how that the author doesn't make the MC and his group always have it easy, they always struggle to get what they want. he/she doesn't hesitate to put the MC in a disadvantage which makes the story more exciting, but maybe you can make someone from the group (or even the MC himself) get a serious injury like broken arm or something which will makes things more inconvenience for them. i think that will put more suspense into the story (just don't makes it permanent). now, i think the biggest problem that the author has to fix is the grammar. i won't talk much about this but if the author can fix the grammar to at least up to 90% then i believe we as the readers will have an even better experience reading this great story.. well, idk if the author will ever read this but if he/she does, then i hope it helps. overall this story is worth reading and still got a lot of room to get better. once again, this is just my personal opinion after reading it this far (ch.69). good luck!
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From what I've read so far I have throughly enjoyed this novel and I hope it continues . The plot is similar to hsotd but with a few variations my hope is that the author can continue down the path they have taken
I havent read it yet though but from the description and the reviews ill definetly read it. Seems like a good book though i will definitely support it with power stones
this is a great story so far .I hope it expands farther then just the high school even though it looks like it is.and also thanks for the chapters.
This book is good I can’t wait for the next chapter to come out. This book is so lol can’t stop laughing it has very good story and funny scenes
I like it this is the Story that I've been looking for a very very long time because it has a vibe of HOTD and I very very like it Please update soon
I am completely engrossed in your novel! It's a literary masterpiece that deserves far more consideration than it does at the moment. The writing is just outstanding, the plot is deftly constructed, and the characters are masterfully drawn. It's absurd that more people haven't had the opportunity to thoroughly enjoy your work yet. I'm excited to work with you to create a plan to make it more visible and get the recognition it so richly merits. Together, let's design a strategy that will present your art to the world
Starts out like High School of the Dead but finds it's own groove For a story set in Merica Fawk Yeah it has a bit too much of an Eastern feel, otherwise a decent read.
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