Demoness's Concept Of Justice
"You are freak"
"I'm ashamed to have given birth to you"
"You should just die, you are just worthless"
A petite little girl pondered "Why are these beings called humans, acting so stupid, just because I don't share their weakness called emotions, they shun me for it,
Well, grandma said to put a bright smile to get together with society and they will love me for it
But, why do I have to earn their love and affection? or respect or anything from them?
I don't feel they need to do it and what do I gain from it?" as her inner thoughts spiraled against the societal norms at young age of five
she soon found emotions within herself, but they arose unexpectedly in particular circumstance and it's not happiness that arose within herself,
It's Boundless rage that would consume her if left unchecked,
It disgusted her to the core when she for the first time in her life watched injustice occur before her very own eyes and Ironically it was done to her grandparents by her own parents
Her emotionless heart twisted as she felt indescribable pain, When she saw her grandmother's detached head placed in front of her with her grandfather head besides, She looked with heartbreaking pain at their faces and remembered how they showered her with unconditional love, even when she didn't express her thankfulness, even when she was different the others, They were kind and warm and recalling those fond memories
She broke, her sanity spiraled out of her grasp, madness consumed her and let it out by massacring her whole family, till the pain in her heart sated by a little, and she had a nothing in her left and waited for her death
But before that, as her life met with an unforeseen event that changed her life,
As she was created anew and born in a cultivation world with system assisting her,
here she became something she doesn't recognize but loved, that is her becoming Demon
Unbiased Justice is what she can be described
She Judge, She Executes, She Torture,
she finds bliss in it, in bloodcurdling screams of the sinned she finds satisfaction within her emotionless heart,
As she always Remained Unbiased throughout her Cultivation Journey, she was sicked by the way cultivators wielded their strength to do whatever they pleased and lived as gods
Here She prepared to Go against gods to exact her cruel Justice, which is harsher than Heaven's wrath itself and as she earns herself the moniker
'Venerable Truth Seeking Demoness' throughout her journey
Which when heard, sinned will kill themselves to avoid the fate of falling into her hands
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This Novel is not for those 17 under, It contains gore and other elements
The writing quality seems good enough, other than some simple errors, overall it is good so far and main character is intriguing, in good way, and every chapterrr had 1000 words or more that's one of things i like, and your way describing could use little work, not that its bad there still room for improvement would love see more and hope u continue writing even after contest
Nice book i really like how the character is developing at a steady pace not like other overpowered **** from starting keep at it and thanks for the new chapter
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Hmmm..... I read this novel because of Yuri Tag....... But....... In the end, Is disappointed me a lot First potensial Harem member is killed by Mc, C'mon tshe evil and use dark art but you are demon so why you kill her... Because she Evil? That idiot Second MC, abandon sick and malnourished little girl but have Great Potensial Ability... And the little girl dead because mc not save her Third Mc meet Demon girl like her i hope some yuri deplopment but, in Reality she evil demon who want to take over mc body, and she die too So in the end, This novel is not For Yuri reader... So far, I only read 21 Chapter
Overall it's pretty interesting. Obviously It's too soon to give a decent evaluation of the story, since at the moment there are only 9 chapters, but so far it's engaging and the main character is quite interesting. The writing isn't perfect, but I already noticed some improvement, which is more than promising. Also the chapters are long enough to be satisfactory :) I look forward to the future of this story.
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This is a great book, great storyline and everything, it has got great potential and I genuinely cannot wait to see how the story develops and how the character develops throughout the story, hope the aurthor posts more chapters soon 👍👍👍👍
I like the story so far, release schedule is not stable. I like the characters, quite fun to read and there's yuri. You can never go wrong with yuri. Overallits quite good but needs more improvement on the grammatical side to be a five star review.
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I really like what the synopsis you provided for us, and I really like how the mc is so charming and dashing.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's an interesting story with intriguing characters...but there is plenty of room for improvement. Capitalization is a problem, as well as comma usage and sentences that last for multiple paragraphs. A bigger issue, though, would be the placement. A sentence can mean different things based on where the punctuation is, so that should be kept in mind. For the story, it has a bit of a problem with agency. Things happen to the MC instead of the other way around. They make the trajectory of the story feel uncertain, which is bad over an extended period of time.
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Great book. I am enjoying reading it.
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