Stuck as a Dungeon Mob

I obviously haven’t read far yet so this short review is more like an impression. And I’m impressed so far. +Good readable English +nice opening +a good sense of humor Of course this might change and I’ll likely update this review at a later stage but for now full stars ⭐️ in hope that the author will find the time and encouragement to bring this story to its end. Thanks yours sincerely King Georg

AVOID THIS NOVEL IF YOU HATE IT WHEN AN AUTHOR NERFS THE MC BACK TO LEVEL 1 AT THE START OF EVERY ARC AND CHANGES EVERYTHING YOU LIKED ABOUT THEIR FIRST ITERATION. ALSO TAKING AWAY BASICALLY ALL OF THEIR SKILLS AND ABILITIES THEY WORKED FOR. ALL GONE. EVERY. VOLUME. Overall the author probably did a good job as I was engaged for all of volume one. Then the author decided to hit the reset button and change the character’s stats and everything back to the starting position and even changed the character from a skeleton into an orc. He’s in a different dungeon too I think, but I dropped the novel since I don’t like this kind of story telling. I become invested in the characters that I read and just completely nerfing them back to the beginning is terrible story telling and is basically a slap in the face for the reader. You’re it basically says that I should never become invested in any of the skills or powers or any aspect of the MC that makes them strong and defines them because at the end of every volume you write you are going to slap the MC back down to the beginning. This just proves that I should never become invested and that is the antithesis of why I real novels. I WANT to care about the main character and watch their systematic growth through the length of the novel. Nerfing them back down to level 1 every volume is just so terrible of an idea. Good luck with your novel but it’s not for me and I wish it was more clear in the synopsis that the author did this style of writing. I would’ve avoided the story like the plague instead of wasting my time and just being slapped in the face by the author.

First Of all I would like to say I'd you are here to decide whether to read it or not yes give it a try Author has done a great job in writing quality as a starter and grammars are decent paragraphs are well written and dialogue is very sensible not to shabby world building is decent as well Now the good side is done there is some mistakes like some times it's hard to understand why health upgrades and why decrease it's confusing and how the system works is confusing too . As a Seasoned reader I consider myself hehe I have strict requirements but I loved this book continue your work :)

Love it, keep it up my guy!!!

Simply I don't like novels where MC is a slave of system. And there are inconsistencies in his health bar sometimes, so it takes all the fun away.....

The author uses way too much text to come to the point. Way too much filler text that does not contribute anything. You scan skip-read over paragraphs and not miss anything. I mean this as in "really bad writing", I don't mind long stories at all! This is like having to listen to someone's presentation about a subject you are actually really interested in, but the guy has 200 slides of which 180 are redundant, off-topic, or just plain boring, and the guy has a sleep-inducing monotonous voice and style. Despite your interest in the subject you wish the same topic would have been presented by a much more skilled presenter.

Terrible novel. So many things wrong with this one, but it all boils down to one thing: the author. In this novel you will find the following: - MC acting dumb or ignorant of something that happened literally one paragraph prior or even right in front of him - Letting enemies go intentionally becuase he is ‘too lazy’ and that leading to massive (obvious) consequences, to which the MC later pulls a “wait, what happened?” - Convenient plot armor such as MC gaining a skill or knowledge that just so happens to solve a major problem that arises just a short while later - Author forcing plot via using problems between system and dungeon - Author constantly going off on tangents and losing of direction in writing the plot I’m not going to go on. If these are acceptable to you, go ahead and read it. In fact, this novel is better than 99% of the original novels on this site where the ‘author’ can’t even write a proper sentence. At the very least, apart from some occasional cringe dialogue, this novel’s langauge is par. Not for everyone, acceptable for some, but not for me. Read at your own discretion.

First volume is more or less fine, consistent progress is made in development, we get to know the characters, etc... But at the end of volume 1 and going into volume 2 the story breaks apart. Nonsensical events happen, shitty plot coincidences pile up and people start doing stuff without explanation. Overall, not really worth your time. Fairly bland at the best of times, barely edible later on.

I’ve read up to chapter 67 (current chapter) and so far it has good English with good grammar as well as an interesting premise. Occasional POV changes that instead of getting in the way, actually contribute to world-building. It seems to be going at a good pace and I like the idea that he has his consciousness stats and his bodies stats, as well that the system and dungeon are separate and even seem to oppose each other in some circumstances. Up until the Orc area (plains) I was reluctant to leave a review as the only other interaction the MC had was with the Lich but during the Orc interactions it’s clear that the author has the ability to write interactions between characters that add to the story. Even during the Skeleton body chapters, the POV change to the branch master and others spice up the story enough to make up for the MC’s interactions.

Chapter 80 (all until now). No spoilers here. The MC is an average teenager, not dumb but not the smartest. No revenge and stuff life that until now, and is not a robotic MC, all in all is a good MC. The world settings until now are pretty normal like any fantasy with mana and orcs etc... That said, the author use an wrel know world and average MC to star his story. Thats when things start to get interessing, the (powers) skills from the MC are unconvencional at least and all the prety existence of the MC start changing the 'know rules' of this world. There are a lot of unexpected developments and turns that most novels avoid or dont do to make the MC cooler or more cold or more awseome but in here its also lead to more ackward funny and unexpected moments. The first arc is the brst until now. And the star of the second arc is a little slow but got better at the middle/end. All in all its a good reading and i look foward to see the next chapters. Thats all folks ;)

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As an avid reader I'd say it's quite the entertaining novel with consistent updates. The protagonist is overpowered in his own way, that being (currently)impervious to true death. He still has a long way to go before he can accomplish anything too significant, but he is getting there.

Can't wait for more. 👌🏾 This is hands down my favorite story on wn. I.hooe that it gets more attention so that people can check it out. I also can't wait to see what the dungeon has in store next.

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