Spartan In Star Wars (Dropped)

Normally I dont write reviews but I can gladly say I can make an exception about this one.A story that combines the very essence of halo and star wars so for any one who loves halo or star wars or perhaps both of them should really pick up this book.So I will rate this book five stars due it is worth it in my opinion.

Story was fantastic until more spartans came out of nowhere ruining the entire story. He isnt unique anymore, now he will be known as an imposter since he isnt even mandalorian. Waste of time reading. Hopefully this review wont get deleted like the last one I did.

I like the 1st volume alot. After that tough, the quality lf the story takes a dramatic nose dive. The second volume contains intellectually incompetant people that just completely trash up the story. If you are looking for a fun read with a starwars / halo crossover, than the first volume of the story is great. After that tough its as if the author decided to write a poor slap stick comedy version as a sequal instead. In fact, volume 2 is reminiscent of the idiots in red vs blue.

I love the concept of the story and this is rare to see on this website for fanfiction. Keep up the good writing and please make it longer within each chapter.

I just realized i forgot to do a review, anyways writing good, charaxters are interesting, and its an interesting idea that i think is gonna turn out great <3

Typically I am not one to write reviews, but for this novel I shall make an exception. I have read to chapter 26 and can confidently say that this fanfiction crossover between Halo and Star Wars goes above and beyond what I had expected when the author wrote that this was his/ her first novel. While there are a few small things that could be worked on such as grammer, overall the quality of work is extremely high. The author seems to have done a decent amount of research on both Halo and Star Wars so the content is fair inline with those novels. Even so the author does a great job on controlling how the world develops with the addition of the Spartan Clan. If I had the option of changing one thing it would be to give the main Spartan more character, because as of now he seems relatively 'dry' in comparison to the rest of the world. I understand those are standard Spartan characteristics but as the main character having something that seperates him from other Spartans would be nice (something like how masterchef is different from the rest of the Spartans that's why we love him) though that is my own opinion and doesn't take away from beauty of the story. All in all, this is a novel I will recommend to any reader who enjoys the whole Space and Sci-fi genre. Even if you have no knowledge of Halo or Star Wars you can still enjoy this novel

really good book I enjoy reading it and the characters seem realistic I can't wait for your hiatus to be over I need this

Please dont take it as a harsh judgment but its really hard to read story when aomeone Travel to uncharted territory and find himself freely talking to other people right away.

TBH one of the best starwars fanfics i have read yet and i cant wait for more keep it up 👍🏻

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I love this story so much! It has given me so many ideas to incorperate into my Star Wars table top game I am running for my friends. Thank you so much for writting this story.

mr author will the spartans make a super weapon as powerfull as the death star or a massive ship like the unsc infinity? also... we need mmooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrr

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