honestly, I'd give this story five stars as it's really amazing its one of the most interesting and intriguing stories I've read. though it only just started I feel like this book is going to be a great one. I'm looking forward to how the entire story would unravel.
3 years ago
5
qunin_e
Okay so... It just started and its amazing at the very first glance. And who hasn't made silly decisions and regret it later? I though personally make a lot got into troubles also... so this is just another real-like story that hooked me!
Keep going author!
3 years ago
3
Ash_Stay
I immediately got hooked into this story. I usually prefer reading mystery and suspence but this one is on a different level. The First chapter is itself amazing and you can't contain yourself from reading more. Good work Author. I loved it
3 years ago
2
The_Procrastinator
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3 years ago
2
SadFritos
I dont read much Fl novels so i dont know what are the mistakes in this novel, but generally it's a good read as I didn't feel 'something' is wrong like other novels!
3 years ago
2
WuxiFan
There are only two chapters but so far the story looks good. It has a gripping start and is intriguing through the chapters. I don't read many FL novels so don't know if this is Cliché or not but the start was interesting.
If you can ignore some minor grammatical mistakes, this is the story for you.
3 years ago
2
26stars
I just read the first three chapters, but I enjoyed it when I read this novel 🤗
The MC Glamour is so interesting. Her character is so special, I think.
The author is so smart in describing the situations. It's so vivid and detailed.
The flow of the story is enjoyable. It's quite relaxing when I read this novel.
Overall, I enjoy this novel, so I give it five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
3 years ago
1
Darkswan
Your story only yes a few chapters but i have to say it is a great read, if you are someone who ignores very little grammatical problem this is a story foe you to read, the author did a great job. It has a gripping start and it is intriguing through the chapters. Kudos to the author.
3 years ago
1
zushe_sensei
loved it everything, characters and plot everything was good great job craving for more gonna add this to library,
definitely recommend......
3 years ago
1
ShamelessPlagarist
I haven't read much romance novels, but this one looks promising if you can look past the few grammatical errors and the confusing sequence of events
3 years ago
1
MattHarris
Romance isn't usually something that I like to read, but sometimes I just need a little to keep me entertained. If I wanted to sit down and read some romance, this is definitely where I will be coming in the future!
3 years ago
0
mirxkewl
So far, I think it's written pretty well for a cliché. There are some capitalisation errors here and there but they're pretty ignorable as it is. I think the whole concept of the game is interesting but I want more information on the FL and where she is before jumping in to the romance main plot. You would also benefit from describing her surroundings more other than purely her thoughts so readers can gauge what it's like for her through indirect description - it makes your writing style more varied. As a story, this has potential of grabbing an audience's attention. Thank you for writing this :)
3 years ago
0
Aevitas
It was a bit too dramatic for my taste, but I don't really read romance novels personally. Overall it is cool.
honestly, I'd give this story five stars as it's really amazing its one of the most interesting and intriguing stories I've read. though it only just started I feel like this book is going to be a great one. I'm looking forward to how the entire story would unravel.
Okay so... It just started and its amazing at the very first glance. And who hasn't made silly decisions and regret it later? I though personally make a lot got into troubles also... so this is just another real-like story that hooked me! Keep going author!
I immediately got hooked into this story. I usually prefer reading mystery and suspence but this one is on a different level. The First chapter is itself amazing and you can't contain yourself from reading more. Good work Author. I loved it
Reveal Spoiler
I dont read much Fl novels so i dont know what are the mistakes in this novel, but generally it's a good read as I didn't feel 'something' is wrong like other novels!
There are only two chapters but so far the story looks good. It has a gripping start and is intriguing through the chapters. I don't read many FL novels so don't know if this is Cliché or not but the start was interesting. If you can ignore some minor grammatical mistakes, this is the story for you.
I just read the first three chapters, but I enjoyed it when I read this novel 🤗 The MC Glamour is so interesting. Her character is so special, I think. The author is so smart in describing the situations. It's so vivid and detailed. The flow of the story is enjoyable. It's quite relaxing when I read this novel. Overall, I enjoy this novel, so I give it five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Your story only yes a few chapters but i have to say it is a great read, if you are someone who ignores very little grammatical problem this is a story foe you to read, the author did a great job. It has a gripping start and it is intriguing through the chapters. Kudos to the author.
loved it everything, characters and plot everything was good great job craving for more gonna add this to library, definitely recommend......
I haven't read much romance novels, but this one looks promising if you can look past the few grammatical errors and the confusing sequence of events
Romance isn't usually something that I like to read, but sometimes I just need a little to keep me entertained. If I wanted to sit down and read some romance, this is definitely where I will be coming in the future!
So far, I think it's written pretty well for a cliché. There are some capitalisation errors here and there but they're pretty ignorable as it is. I think the whole concept of the game is interesting but I want more information on the FL and where she is before jumping in to the romance main plot. You would also benefit from describing her surroundings more other than purely her thoughts so readers can gauge what it's like for her through indirect description - it makes your writing style more varied. As a story, this has potential of grabbing an audience's attention. Thank you for writing this :)
It was a bit too dramatic for my taste, but I don't really read romance novels personally. Overall it is cool.