My Life as a Gamer Across the Multiverse(ENG)

Wait this is originaly spanish? fml i read the english version instead, my primary language is spanish, welp no pill for regrets lol... good fic btw im up to date, time to reread spanish version ig.

"I made an A.I watch HOTD and forced it to make a fanfic about it" honestly feels like it. The MC is generic no personality, no ambition no wishes, just blank and uninteresting. He chooses to go to worlds he knows about yet he doesn't know about the main casts and important plot lines YET sometimes he does and the authors defense is he doesn't know much about it except the general plot, which is a grade a BS for not knowing about the main heroines in an waifu ecchi anime world. The girls are simple at best and cardboard cutout at normal. " I see MC, mc talk to me, i love mc" . Dialogues between characters are what you would expect from 2 socially inept kids talking to each other, i have doubts that if the author ever had a conversation with a human before. The whole thing is translated so bad that MTL would feel like a piece of literature art , with how even the simple gender terms are messed up and the author says he pays attention to it from chapter 35. THATS almost like 2 worlds, the author put 2 worlds of content and then decides that, you know what.... i should "try" to "fix" my grammar so it would be easier to know who is talking about what. Tl'Dr - the worst fanfic i read with the worst translation I've seen, don't even bother with it... or you can, I'm not your mother i don't care how you waste your time

Well...that's like ideal novel for this site. -copy pasting of original story without much changes. -shallow characters, especially mc, I can't even describe him. Just some random dude that's doesn't feel much and doesn't have any goals or even desires. Great! -minimum conversations between characters. Something like this : hello bushujima - San let's have a talk. Well, let's talk - said saeko. And those they talk for 3 hours straight. And yes, the quantity of details is pretty much same. Don't expect... Anything. -mc just follows plot. Well... Yeah. Conclusion: exactly what you expect from webnovel, and I don't think author even trying that hard. So yeah, probably whould be dropped before something changes.

Well the translation is a little bit bad but is okay. . . . . do you plan add a voting for the next world or you have something in your kind? . . . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

You just follow the plot. You don't really add anything. It like if you watch the show and write what is happening then call it your story. Your insert getting all the girls and all that power doesn't really matter when all you do it follow the plot. Dungeons, gamer shops, relationship readers and gachas are lazy ways to power up your insert. Instead of affecting the story by gaining exp in the story you just hop into a dungeon and get free power. Your relationship value never go down or deteriorate over time. Third parties trying to get with your girl can never lower your values with her. So instead of working through issues or maintaining relationships you just headpats a girl for +1 one hundred times and thats it. She's your doll to bang anytime anywhere. Never disagrees never disappointed always ready to die for you. Rinse and repeat with all the girls.

I’ve read this in non English but now it’s in English so 5 stars so far. Yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes

The author needs someone to go over his/her story so that it sounds better to people who speak English when they read it In other words, you need an editor to proofread your writing quality

I have read countless gamer stories. They all make the same mistakes. edit your hp regeneration to per minute. as it is now, his Regen could be compared to wolverine

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Honestly i am surpriced how most gamer fanfics are more of a wish fulfillment than "Wish fulfillment" novels... Have to write a few more words I think.

I think the fanfic is very good, but I think it lacks depth in terms of the relationship of the characters, it is very superficial in my opinion, try to make it deeper or explain more about the development of relationships. Another thing that I think you did wrong, the level of Frank and his class must be different, what do I mean by this, that when Frank is level 1000 (example) it will take him 100000000 (example) to raise his new class to lvl 2 recently , that has no logic. Ideally and I recommend that the exp to raise your normal level and that of your class be different, that every time you play a new class, to take it to max level, it takes the exp it costs to raise from level 1 to 100 (while rarer the class, more exp for your cap). And that the exp needed to level up continues to grow exponentially.

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the story is not bad but its got alot of grammer problems

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