Becoming the strongest in the shinobi world

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i tried i really did but the decesion to kill the uzimaki just ruined this for me there is no justification for it...even a truly evil person cant justify it so I'm dropping because you ruined it

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this is highkey too fast pased dosent flesh out characters and the writing isnt good i like cold hearted mcs but the mc for this seems so cringe and boring ,and everything is just handed to him and nothing is explained

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He gets way too many advantages. Also, he starts in Iwagakure, which is a cool idea, but you failed to follow up on that and just ignored the setting. Also, everything is very poorly written in general.

character design really drags this story down. its not written poorly, but.. just the premise is too bad for the story to hold weight. the mc is given the most ridiculous advantages, but still acts like he deserves/earnt his strength. he has every element affinity, can takes anyone's kekkai genkai, has a tailed beast, all while being 10 years old. its set up to make the mc a god (literally). its just too much for it to be interesting/fulfilling. he beats the sannin at 10 years old.

In no way is this a 4 star. either alot fake reviews or deleting stuff. Its so generic and cliche..only thing that makes it different is timeframe and another village other than konoha. Mc has a system plus all affinities and the combos like kekkai genkais or whatever. Has them.all. gets 5 wishes so op af and no real.growth. its boring af

Have you read " Naruto : Our goal is to dig the corner of konoha " novel ???.. that has some similarities with this one ... it's about an op mc from iwa who sways people to join iwa when danzo tries to kill them like the uchiha..

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13 Chapters in can't read anymore the grammar is awful, the mc is been nerfed, the timing and spacing could do with a lot of work. The story is a good idea just done badly.

First chapter make you want to quit the story, but try to power through it. The characters are quite frankly weird, and the interaction are unrealistic most of the time. The whole world seems revolve around mc and can't stop moaning about how genius mc is. Now for the positive side of thing, the story is quite interesting because mc are born in iwa after first shinobi war. He also recruiting blood line to strengthen iwa in the future and upcoming second shinobi war. But that happened in around chap 70, so yeah. Just skip a lot of first couples of chapters or when the interaction between characters becomes to cringe.

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to love reading stories about evil mc is like loving ntr treason and cuckolding. it's not normal. to love reading stories about evil mc is like loving ntr treason and cuckolding. it's not normal. to love reading stories about evil mc is like loving ntr treason and cuckolding. it's not normal.