Eternal Happiness
Author: Eternalhappiness
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An innocent boy from a village who dreamed of traveling the world and drawing its beauty, suddenly got recruited into a sect of immortal cultivators, entering this new world the boy finds himself forced to go against his own principles to survive. In this world where the strong prey on the weak, will the boy find his own happiness?
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The story has potential. Quite unlike the usual Xianxia novels where the main character gets involved in a lot of mess, this one despite the mc being untalented, the people around him didn't change their treatment toward him, he has done the test and he was found to have a bad talent that's it. The novel can be considered slow but it's worth the read; unlike the novels whose authors just write to fill up the word count.
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Good story so far, have a lot of potential for development, grammar is decent. It's not like your usual face slapping power journey cultivation story, it takes time for all character to be fleshed out.
The grammar is very bad in my opinion.. Author is clearly not native english speaker.. the sentences and words go wrong, wrong places for commas and periods go in wrong places and even names change.. for example "Ah Shi is the same person as "Ah Shu" but it switches from time to time. too many character names that are quite similar so that I have no idea who is who.. there are some cliches but nothing too bad for now.. the story would be nice but the grammar is so bad that i have to read skipping some parts only trying to understand what is happening without reading every sentence deeply..