The Admiral’s Daughter and the Pirate King
***Book 1 Completed***
It is not always the prince who sweeps a maiden off her feet. Sometimes the person who is thought to be a villain is actually the true hero of the story.
Hence, only a keen eye can see beyond the rough edges.
“DANGER!”
That's one of the things that can be associated with him.
However, how can one revered as dangerous be at the same time the one that can make her heart beat down her throat and caused her breath to hitch?
How might she avoid him when each time he gravitates toward her, she finds herself unfit to move?
Entrapped.
Dazed.
Bathe with palpable tension no one could rupture.
Was it just fear? Or on the other hand, was it something entirely different? A blossoming passion, perhaps? A forbidden love that would send both their worlds reeling upside down.
Many have tried to escape the claws of fate, yet close to none have succeeded.
Vereena Braxton, daughter of an Admiral from House MacGhille. An epitome of flawlessness she had to uphold and a scandal to avoid. Everything is perfect as her destiny had already been planned out as she ought to marry the crowned prince.
That is, until one night, pirates came along their harbor and caused mayhem across their city. Where she finds herself in the clutches and at the mercy of a vicious pirate, stowed her away from the life she once knew.
But with the time they spent, Vereena has come to ask herself. Has he really taken her as a captive, or has he set her free from the rigid society she lived in?
WSA Theme: Historical
When I said review, I'd definitely give an honest one. First of all, I'm impressed. The title and the cover deemed to fit right on each other, and the synopsis had been played well. It's not the first time I've seen good books around here, but for sure, this book will be worth a thousand power stones in the later months. Second, the title does seemed fit to Webnovel, but remember that vague and indefinite one --sometimes-- doesn't work out. There's a certain target market that readers would like to enjoy at the very moment they see the cover and the title. Third, the synopsis portrayed well, but some of the unnecessary parts could be scraped off. We don't want to do an information dump regarding every scenes in the novel. It just felt like the trailer you've seen is lile the movie itself shortened for 1 minute. Fourth, I like your first chapter. There are certain words that are highfalutin, but you didn't overdo it. Make sure that you make the paragraphs convincing, compelling, smooth to read, and don't use highfalutin words if it's insignificant on your sentences. So, overall, you're doing a great job. I might as well see you climbing the rankings in the next months! Good luck with your future endeavors!
The title of the book itself is captivating and draws one to it. The perfect descriptions by the author brings vivid imaginations in the minds of the readers. The story itself is mind blowing, what else do you need to know to read this book? Absolutely nothing. Kudos author, best wishes.
I've been recently listening to a song by Eason Chen from Arcane in which the message was that not every hero has to be a brighter being. The plot and themes of this book just reminded me of that. A story based on person who seems to be a villain but is secretly the savior! Interesting and definitely mind-blowing!
Wow wow wow....this book is really stunning! I recommend this book to everyone and you won't regret reading this. I'm adding it up to my library. Author you're doing great!
The book cover is eye-catching. The plot is nice and the first chapters captured my attention. The Author really did a great job in writing the book.
No updates for some days and had been waiting for next chapter with the book in my library, please author update. BTW, this book is great and I wish our author a great success in the contest, a nice plot and a great potential but can't guarantee the book a 100% great. Still waiting for updates author!
I think you could afford to be more precise in your writing. There is an awkwardness in the flow and maybe that's just me. When I read over the paragraphs my tongue tripped over some of the sentences. Read aloud correct the flow, without losing the flowery thoughts of Vareena which work well for the story. Other than that I think Your characters are solid. Vareena is impressive and her circumstance carries a believability to it
Since there isn’t much chapters on this book all I can say is the book is interesting and would want to keep reading. I love the synopsis and how good it is written. The plot is also amazing. Keep it up author
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