Solo Levelling: Perception

I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.

This look good. but please don't make it a harem novel

Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a fresh perspective on the world of Solo Leveling by focusing on Jinah, rather than her older sibling Jin-Woo. While the novel boasts well-written character interactions and good writing quality, it's held back by odd nerfs, slow plot development, and short chapters that leave you thinking, "That's it?" In the story, the protagonist gets to choose his world, and he picks Solo Leveling because he loves Jinah. He's granted three wishes with different restrictions, and wishes for Gojo Satoru's Six Eyes, Tatsuya Shiba's Regrowth, and Kurogane Ikki's Complete Material Martial Artist abilities. Set in Jinah's class in Seoul, the novel introduces the protagonist as a transfer student from Japan who wears a blindfold. Driven by his love for Jinah, his primary goal is to get along with her, rather than jumping into dungeons and fighting. One thing I like about this novel is the character interactions. The dialogue is smooth, and the characters stay true to their personalities, making their conversations enjoyable and genuine. The writing is pretty solid, with the author using third-person narration to show what the characters are thinking and feeling. However, there are issues. The nerfs to the protagonist's abilities are confusing and don't make sense. The focus on Jinah, while refreshing, may require more exploration of the protagonist's development. Additionally, the novel doesn't provide much world-building beyond the combat and situations, which could make it feel less immersive. Another concern is the pacing. The chapters are really short, often with just one main event, and the plot moves incredibly slowly. After 20 chapters, it feels like only a week has gone by in the story, which is frustrating. In conclusion, Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a new perspective on the world of Solo Leveling, enjoyable character interactions, and decent writing. However, the confusing nerfs, short chapters, and slow plot development prevent it from reaching its full potential. With more focus on the protagonist's development, improved pacing, and better world-building, this novel could become a much more enjoyable read.

Not many chapters but good story, I hope this story doesn't turn into a harem......................................................................................................................

Great premise, with SL fanfics being rare, I was excited. And the start was decent. But the author drops the ball hard on the romance part (which mind you is a big part of the story). By drop the ball hard, I mean France vs Italy World Cup Zidane level of hard. The MC is just a lying creep, he wants to woo the Romantic Interest but just stalks her and lies through his teeth ALL the TIME. And not white lies to protect her, or to hide his secrets etc, naah, just lies for the sake of lies. It's really hard to read without getting chills due to how creepy the mc comes off as. There's also his whole "nice guy" act, Reddit level "Nice Guy" too. Not my cup of tea.

Dropped it as of ch 11, couldn't like the creepy manipulative and compulsive-lying MC enough to keep reading. Almost every conversation with Jin-Ah is either a compulsive lie or a manipulation, it's hard to read the romance develop like this. Also as of ch 11 there is no explanation about his obsession with Jin-Ah and why she's his girl of choice. I might come back to check it out later at ch100+ and see whether or not the MC stays the same.

Only one chapter so far but it’s quite good in terms of quality I do ask that if possible to not make it a herem but it is your choice anyway keep up the great work👍🏾

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Pls no harem I beg there’s already too much stories with harems so it will be refreshing to see a story without one

definitely not the best. but the future is promising. Especially the fact that mc says he loves a woman and writes that he can have a harem in the summary makes this unbearable. I'm going to read this, but I'll probably look and read it in 12 years. 80% of the books will either fall or be left unfinished. still worth a try.

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Second review: dropped. Any story development will be in 20 years. Better read another story. 1/5 for update and story development

MAKE IT A HAREM. MAKE IT A HAREM. MAKE IT A HAREM

The quality is decent with a few grammatical errors and typos but nothing major. The story starts out well but it soon gets disturbing, atleast for me. Mc is obsessive of the female lead and a compulsive liar with a tendency to stalk her. Author does not bother to explain or expand on the canon plot that much and mainly focuses on the romance and slice of life aspect, if you can even call it romance instead of pure deceit and manipulation. In short; premise was great but execution fell flat.