Story also made for Royal Road. Link to my account: "https://www.royalroad.com/profile/525936/fictions"
Van and his friend Magus had reincarnated in another world with magic. Tasked to kill the demon lord, they set forth.
Van was granted very rough skills that made life for him in that world a living hell, yet he muscled through.
Magus however, was bestowed with unfair skills. Due to some of said skills, he gained a harem, which in time, included the girlfriend Van made in the world.
After beating the Demon Lord, and after finding out his girlfriend had been stolen from him, he got very upset and so he went to propose to... The Demon Lord...!?
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Main characters get NTR'd. Author tries to play this of because of the hero's "passives" but instead of coming clean and telling the MC about it they continue to sneak around behind his back. Absolutely awful friend, If he had any respect or comradery with the MC he would have told him straight away. No justification whatsoever for his actions. 1 Star
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I was really let down by this story, especially after enjoying the author's other work, 'Anti-NTR Man.' Initially, it seemed like it was heading in a direction I liked, but it quickly took a turn for the worse. It felt like the story gave me hope and then just crushed it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the writing itself is solid, but honestly, I'm pretty disappointed.
I like this novel, because the MC is a genuinely good person and i hope he has a relationship with the demon lord
I am loving the story so far. But i will be disappointed if he will have a relationship with the daughters of his former party. Because mc is becoming a cupcake man tbh or relationship with his former party or humans they will just die of old age fast, he should go to the secure one like the demon king. And also update daily if possible.
Solid novel with excellent writing. The direction isn't one that most people on WN would enjoy, but if you have a few brain cells to enjoy a story, do give this a read. I enjoy this one more than his other works. And tbh, I would much prefer if mc didn't have a harem and ends up with... let's say best girl, but that is up to the author. I'm sure I'll enjoy the story anyways. Keep up the great work!
I really like all your stories , but this one is better for me ! Please , update more often . .............................................................
This is one of the best upcoming stories I've read in a while 👏👏
I will say, I don't think this Fanfic deserves 5 stars for the update, but it's so good that I'm going to leave it like that, but all the other 5 stars it certainly deserves
Don't let anyone stop you from writing what you want.
good book, has good pace for the story and even better character design (made me tear up a few times) is a most definite recommendation. and good job author 👍
The story is very developed to the point that you can tell it was made with love and care. But please do not abandon it, unlike other novels I read this one is the only one that made me enjoy reading web novels again.
The story development is quite slow paced and so is the updating status . Though it is quite troublesome to get a clear idea of MC'S personality or mindset. Sometimes the story feels to forcefully lengthened, missing its natural flow . But it still has a captivating storyline and background, making reading it enjoyable
Author, just tell me one thing, will Van have one wife or not? Because, the way his friend's wife are reacting, I don't like it. i particularly prefer no polygamy or harem for this novel of yours, so if you enlightened me.