In a world that is infested with grimms can a boy survive with his dance of love?

||Bamf Jaune Arc MC and Extended AU||

||RWBY×Slight elements From Nasuverse/Fate|

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Crossposted on ffnet and scribble hub.

By the way thanks to Coeur AlAran (professor arc) for the inspiration!

if we reach 150 power stone then it's a double chapter in the next update!

also this got a bit of a slow start, it got good about 6 chapters in.. honest review.. so if you want to read my story, please read until chapter 10 or more if possible before dropping it.


also from chapter 10-26 it is around thr 1 to 2k words count but after that it's in the 2 to 4k words count.

The Dance Of Love (RWBY/FATE)

ACTION

ROMANCE

ADVENTURE

WEAKTOSTRONG

HAREM

OVERPOWERED

FATE

RWBY

FATE STAY NIGHT

RWBY CROSSOVER

Mi puntuacion es generosa, tengo problemas con tu historia, por qué en lugar de escribir una historia conectas hechos en lugar de que el lector se de cuenta de los acontecimientos que sucede, poniendo un ejemplo: en lugar de que escribas una historia donde jaune decide hacer su propio estilo de lucha y nos muestres como se le ocurrio como se escabulle para entrenar, como roba la espada de madera y por un descuido mordred lo atrapa y decide ayudarlo, algo que podria tomar de uno a dos capitulos dependiendo de que tambien lo escribes, simplemente lo resumes como una ocurrencia de un parrafo cuando claramente o al menos supongo que es importante para la trama. Y todo es bastante plano, tu escritura es sosa y tratas de expresar la tristeza de jaune pero están breve y repentina que una vez mas algo que debió ser algo importante lo salte por qué me aburrió leerlo. Esfuérzate un poco más escribiendo los escenarios y la trama

Mandatory 5 Stars Review! Please you when you review make sure for it to be a constructive  ctiticsm! and make sure to be polite because if you have any problem with my writing then i should tell you that english is not my first LANGUAGE!!!!!!! and i love you all! and also thank you for reading my story!!!!!!!

honestly the only problem is the grammar cuz you keep misspelling words and leaving out letters and even just putting the wrong letters

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