Wizardry System

Typical good start and then ****ed up. The Author tried to add mystery and excitement to break up the usual story line (going to NY to find an artifact) and ruined the story after ca. 20 chapters. His original characters are to weak to cary the story, which does not matter that much if you work with cannon characters or events, but is critical to new scenes. I know writing is hard work, but this is cruel to the readers. I am simply disappointed. Maybe fewer chapters would have been a lot better. Tip** for the Author: 1. Fanfiction by deffinition revolves around known characters. Use them to flesh out your story and cover your weaknesses. 2. Reincarnated/Transmigated MCs have an inherent knowledge advantage, use it(ROR, CoS, MMap, Kitchen, secret passages). 3. Rich powerfull MC makes for politics (MC's Dad buying broms without rich/powerfull rivals interfering? No aliances? Duel Club without MC's Dad or Lucius M. interference?) On of the best parts of the HP universe are the political undercurrents. 4. If writing about social situations is not your strong point, copy from the original, that is why it os fanfiction. 5. Strong MC needs his own antagonist/problems unique to him. Thanks for reading, good luck to the author.

trash the mc is on the side of light who can't kill an enemy who uses killing curse on them, only use non lethal spell on enemy that's trying to kill them

The beginning has too much info dumping about the MC's system. Then the MC has an unhealthy interest in getting to know the main cast. It got boring after that and nothing really exciting happens besides fix-it moments. Not a bad story, but not a very interesting one.

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I almost quit reading half through then I realized that it's getting interesting when you add some unexpected events. And its a good thing that your keeping the story in it's original plot.

Well there is something I wanna share,author no offense.....well I don't care 1)system sucks it is limiting the growth of mc and mc feel he is getting stronger Well he got pretty much good memory if mc word hard he'll get much power without the help of fucking system 2)author spends 50+ch repeating the same story of 1st yr Hogwarts 20% deviation 3)if only space time power is given to harmione than she will be much more overpowered from the fucking mc 4)I read whole ch+ hoping for something new & all I read mc begging for quest

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Honestly I did not have much expectations but this writing turned out to be really well done and got me hooked on the story and this story is also a system novel which is what I love ❤️!

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Sorry this story is so bad.. My head hurt read all this.. What with all this Prometheus and founders test. The MC is to realied to the system.

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i personally dislike the harry potter world as one to read, but this read made it not only possible to have a good tie reading it, i had a genuine great time reading this. its worth the read so try it out.