Ryu from earth chooses to be born in the World of One Piece. Granted three wishes and in a time of powerhouses rising one after another what shall he accomplish
I read the first wish and lost interest... I never have issues with people wishing for abilities that make them stronger
But wishes like dungeons or systems or anything that gives them an easy path. I dislike greatly
4 years ago
4
longchicken888
Is there any way how i can read advanced chapters like Patreon. Please do us all a favour and don‘t drop. At least if you feel like wanting to drop them round up the story. I fell in Love with this work. 🥰🥰🥰
4 years ago
4
AnimeFan_OG
. Little chracter development. Same with character design. Story development first is good untill the fight with Im. After that he seals himself in this Tower and some no name characters come and go through the improtant points in one piece history. At thistime it's just skimming the chapters for me cause the chapter semm very dull. Random characters pop out of nowehre and gets extremly confusing.
4 years ago
3
Nebula_Verse
This is to good this can easily contend with the best one piece fan Fiction very excellent love it dude hope you post more very good I can't even say
4 years ago
1
Manoj_M_B
please don't drop it................................................,.......................................................................
It was a good read, and I hope it stays that way,
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4 years ago
0
REDVI
Noice
4 years ago
0
Newnoob
Greatly done author-san🔥🔥 Truly a remarkable story. Can't wait for more chapters, also will the m.c have any children in the future?🤔 If yes will he join the straw hats? Anyways thanks for story🤗🤗🤗🤗
No words, simply nicee! I hope for more interesting things to happen. Thats all ! hehehehehehhehehehehhehehehehehe.......................................
4 years ago
0
Porthos10
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kingdom-building fanfiction. the length of each chapter is correct and for the moment the updates are regular.
( - )
The downside to remember before reading this novel is the spelling mistakes that jump out like Gaurds instead of Guards. This is why i put 3stars for writings quality.
Moreover, the character design is slightly lacking. indeed, due to the number of secondary characters, the author does not manage to give them a sense and a background enough pushed. This why I put 4 stars for the characters designs.
I read the first wish and lost interest... I never have issues with people wishing for abilities that make them stronger But wishes like dungeons or systems or anything that gives them an easy path. I dislike greatly
Is there any way how i can read advanced chapters like Patreon. Please do us all a favour and don‘t drop. At least if you feel like wanting to drop them round up the story. I fell in Love with this work. 🥰🥰🥰
. Little chracter development. Same with character design. Story development first is good untill the fight with Im. After that he seals himself in this Tower and some no name characters come and go through the improtant points in one piece history. At thistime it's just skimming the chapters for me cause the chapter semm very dull. Random characters pop out of nowehre and gets extremly confusing.
This is to good this can easily contend with the best one piece fan Fiction very excellent love it dude hope you post more very good I can't even say
please don't drop it................................................,.......................................................................
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It was a good read, and I hope it stays that way, ..............................................................................
Noice
Greatly done author-san🔥🔥 Truly a remarkable story. Can't wait for more chapters, also will the m.c have any children in the future?🤔 If yes will he join the straw hats? Anyways thanks for story🤗🤗🤗🤗
ok,I am waiting for the next chapter
5 star no need to review, stars speak them self
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No words, simply nicee! I hope for more interesting things to happen. Thats all ! hehehehehehhehehehehhehehehehehe.......................................
( + ) kingdom-building fanfiction. the length of each chapter is correct and for the moment the updates are regular. ( - ) The downside to remember before reading this novel is the spelling mistakes that jump out like Gaurds instead of Guards. This is why i put 3stars for writings quality. Moreover, the character design is slightly lacking. indeed, due to the number of secondary characters, the author does not manage to give them a sense and a background enough pushed. This why I put 4 stars for the characters designs.