Gina Yulia Atmaja is a lovely girl who is kind and yet looks cold. She is driven out of the house by the Father and her beloved lover dumps her and prefers her step-sister. With the help of a man in power Gina tried to avenge heartache to those who had been hurting her. Did Gina find her happiness?
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Quite simple and easy to read! If you guys want to a not so plot driven story and a romance themed novel then this is definitely worth a try!
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the story is great. the characters are not so bad, and the plot line is actually great too, but the novel is in great need of editing. It feels like the novel was translated by a machine. the grammatical errors kill the whole vibe and feeling of the novel. please get someone to edit it. I can also help to edit if you give me access cause this is really a great story that shouldn't go to waste !
The story-line is not bad, but Author you need to improve your writing quality. Description was not very good and lacks liveliness. story development isn't bad, but I'm mostly disappointed in the Character design. Specially FL's character is ridiculous, contradictory and too artificial . I didn't get any proper character. Only ML's character design is PASSABLE. Background is vague and unclear. If you ever edit, please consider these points. The writing quality failed to show characters emotion, just FL's annoying all the time 'Hik hik' crying is too boring and disgusting.
hoping against hope for a day when webnovel gets tired of boyfriends dumping the seemingly 'perfect' FLs for her not so 'perfect ' step sisters
The story is good and very interesting.. im waiting your update..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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Interesting story! More chapter updates please![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I enjoyed this story however I am also disappointed by a few things...first, the translation is not good, second, I felt very cheated with this novel!! To stretch the number of chapters, some paragraphs are repeated from one chapter to the other throughout. Basically, you pay for 4 chapters to in fact only get 2!! It really isn't fair to the readers to be extorted!
The story is easy to understand and its story development process is also very stable. But the point regarding grammatical mistakes and spellings should be kept in mind. I would like to say that after editing it once , it'll be a very wonderful piece. Best wishes 🕊️
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