The One My Heart Seeks

The One My Heart Seeks

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Author: ALLEY
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"Why do I get a feeling that I have seen here somewhere before?"



Xavier Carter is a guy who is having difficulty in living because of a complicated family problem. Receiving an inexplicably large amount of hate from his family that he does not even know why all he ever loved was one woman. The woman whom he had gotten the love he deserves.



Little did he know, that after many years of not seeing each other, something bad has happened. Tragic news came his way and found out that the person he gets affection from is already gone.



He continued living his life of misfortune, thinking that it is fine. But deep in his heart, he still seeks for the attention and affection that his mother gave him. Everything changed, when one day, he saw a vision of a woman.



A woman that will change his view of life.



A woman that he seeks.

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ALLEY
ALLEY

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ALLEY
ALLEY

ANOTHER SHAMELESS REVIEW. I AM ALREADY RELEASING THE REVISED EDITION OF THE NOVEL SO THE CURRENT CHAPTER WAS DELETED THANK YOU AND PLEASE DO READ MY NOVEL. JUST A SHAMELESS PROMOTION HEHE

4 years ago
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imagineTishaD
imagineTishaD

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Josev_Quadra
Josev_Quadra

Nice story! In fact it's very well-made. However, I would like to know more about the characters development. This novel is very addicting to read due to the intense development. Good work!

4 years ago
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TaintedMetal
TaintedMetal

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Vidit_Verma
Vidit_Verma

The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . Really enjoyed it

4 years ago
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_midnightsunshine_
_midnightsunshine_

I suggest you read till Chapter 6 at least! Such a captivating story. I was so shook and I couldn’t stop reading. The story is a little too fast paced and I wish author didn’t skip the character developments of the good characters. Otherwise it’s such a good read! I’m adding it to my library...please update!

4 years ago
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MissReeed
MissReeed

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Aryna_Stan
Aryna_Stan

Oops! I just remembered that I haven't reviewed your book, silly me and I'm your biggest fan so now back to the book. Seeking you is simply awesome, the angst gives me goosebumps and the sad scenes make me want to cry. When a book touches you that deeply you know that you've bumped into a really good book with a really talented Author. Good work darling❤️❤️

4 years ago
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sunakodwallflower
sunakodwallflower

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4 years ago
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meixiaolian
meixiaolian

I like the way you write it, its simple and easy to understand. I won't spoil much for the readers. I like augustine, i also ship augustine and the MC. Keep writing :)))

4 years ago
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RD_Hughes
RD_Hughes

There is a great concept to this book. The author understands the feelings of pain and is able to portray that through very relatable characters, and their interactions. The plot is machine gun listed at you, at a blistering speed and I would like the author to slow down and really describe what is going on, instead of just telling the reader. This makes the big plot moments, that are good, seem very sudden and pass just as quickly. PROs: - Great Characters - A very good concept in the story - Very relatable interactions between characters CONs: - Pace is too fast, and misses details. Suggestions: - Better structure of sentences. Especially dialogue - Show the scene more than tell the scene. - Don't use HAHA

4 years ago
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Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_dark

This is very nice and interesting novel. I really appreciate the efforts of author. It's story development and character designs are very good. I liked it. keep it up dear author👍👍

4 years ago
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Seulil2061
Seulil2061

The Book is really good. The more I read the more I got interest. The story description the character discription everything is good. I'm looking forward to read next Chapters 😊

4 years ago
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Kookie_Gee
Kookie_Gee

I really love the whole concept going on here and I love the characters and how the family was described, the different scenes but I hope author writes more of scenes that connect the main parts as in writing a little context between any two main incidents in the book! I absolutely love the plot and how the author leaves cliffhangers! It is a really nice story although there were a little tenses mistakes in the dialogues! I totally recommend this book! Good work author keep up the good work!

4 years ago
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