My Time System
This novel is under massive editing.
Ishigami Jeran is a single 19-year-old freshman college student, A self Proclaimed Genius about everything except being kind. He lives with his twin brother in the Philippines because of their family problem while his whole family lives in Kyoto, Japan.
His premonition came true from his dream. He died in a bus accident, But for some odd reason he woke up lying on a shrine.
In that place, A woman suddenly appeared and identified herself as Chronohades, The gatekeeper and the God of Time. To clear up Ishigami's head, That was full of questions. She told him that he was truly dead and that he is now standing in front of the gate through the Spirit Realm. In certain circumstances, Chronohades proposed a deal. Get reincarnated again, pass the trial and fight The Brixis Empire, that once terrorized that world, Or rest your soul in the Spirit Realm. Ishigami answered while trembling due to the unpreparedness of his soul to devote himself to fighting. Therefore Chronohades bestowed upon a power called the "Time System."
In the late game, he called himself the God of Time.
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Ishigami: "My life ended in the tragic car accident and I was reincarnated as a savior of my crush but after that, I got sent into another world named Ozeathra, where the world is full of unfairness and where I will experience the real betrayal, despair, and sorrow.
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Other Tags: R18, Tragedy, Betrayal, Weak to Strong, Gods, Demons, OP Main Character, Harem, War, Ruthless-Cold MC, Medieval Era, Conspiracy, Explicit Violence, Political, Rebellion, Revenge, Rivalries, Terrorism, Matured Themes, Dark Fantasy, Person in a Strange World, Summoned into Another World, Profanity, Manipulation, Kingdom, Ideals, Female Characters Supremacy
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DISCLAIMER: Every chapter of my work is all RAW and Unedited because it was hard to meet the deadline. I will edit this in Fall 2021 and release the completed edited version of the novel in Winter 2022.
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Moderator: Fujiwara_Aoi
Content & Platform Editor: Roy!
Story Reviewer: KCSakkimi
Book Cover Artist: turtleboiii
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author made this novel. Good luck on your MGS journey of daily updates for four months. I've been there and I can say at least that it was a good experience for me. I am praying for your recovery 🙏 Please don't give up hope yet.
This book is lacking only one thing, and that is proper editing, but it is already pointed out in the synopsis that the writer will make the editing later this year. So now I can only do is wait for the proper version and immediately soak myself in this fantastic book!!!
I hope I can get back as much as possible, but I still have things to do in my life that are more important than writing. I immediately apologize to all of you that I didn’t finish this novel, and it gave a cliffhanger to all of you. The life I live now is quite not pleasant. The first thing I will do is rehabilitate myself. But don't worry because I have a replacement, his name is Kirschblue, he's my trusted friend from the Philippines. Maybe I mentioned something in my novel about the Philippines, and it was because of him. He will temporarily manage my social media accounts and other writing accounts. I have only one reason to quit. • I want to move on from the past, the mistakes I have made, and the regrets.
I think author it will be better if you join our community and tag your friends with your works. If you're not good at English find a translator and editor to make you ease.
Dearest Author, You're slow burns are exceptionally well drawn out and played. Makes a wonder how you became so gifted in the area of romance drama.
You're a new author right? I can help you, first find a mentor that will explain and teach you to make a good story. Second be confident even your work is not good and last make a good story with a good lesson in the end.
The novel was a good fanatic story. The updating stability was not a good well because of his own problems. Recommended do not hesitate to put this in your reading list.
Hello Author, I am on Webnovel, and wanted to ask you something. I have messaged you on Instagram, can you kindly check and reply me dear author ?
Your boredom on your house will become nothing because of this story heartwarming yeah very recommended and the last support our dearest author.
Honest Review I will post this about Ishigami and Risya, I want that they still together even in the finale of this story. The story was too promising
I'm the moderator (not editor). Itsuki-san finding her own editor. I don't know what on her mind, she rejected my offer last last week. She told me so I wouldn’t have a hard time taking care of the feedbacks. If the author is offline or not available, you can still message me regarding for the comments, reviews, questions.
The synopsis alone can hook you up wtf noice !!! Ive been blessed 🥲 Tears of joy ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥
The author doesn't seem like English is his or her strongest language but it is a good attempt at writing for someone not well versed in the language. The story would do better as a comic where you see it visually and interruptions by the author within the story is more acceptable. I suggest the author to read simple English fairytales by Enid Blyton or Aesops fables to get a better understanding of writing fluently. I myself started writing after reading books by British and American authors. :) Good job, Author-tan, don't ever stop learning and creating!
I can tell OP is trying very hard with this story. I think it's an inspiring work of passion. OP, you're doing really great work! It's interesting to read. Keep up the good work.
Good job. You've written a great novel.please take care of grammatical errors,I hope you'll do that coming days. The character development and world background is awesome. Best of luck.