The inheritance
.... "Bella" Ray called her name with so much melody. Pulling her hand close to his chest to allow her listen to his heart beat. See. My heart beat for only you, Ray assured his girlfriend
Raymond Williams a successful singer and novelist is in a twist between the past that hurt and uncertain present. When an ex girlfriend comes back, knocking with a child.
Can he trust the woman that hurt and broken his heart three years ago. Or the woman who has never giving him a reason to worry.
"You have no brains, you have no talent, you are useless just like your mother this is what Bella hears from her adopted mother for the past seventeen years of her life.
Bella wisdom a nineteen years old lady who trys to survive in a world where she felt had no place for an orphan like herself. After two years of trying to get into college to become a lawyer Bella find a new part to become a writer but first she will need to get admitted into Mount Wing where only the very talented and wealthy students are welcome.
The new part opens a new world of opportunities but challenges for her as she trys to find her new happiness.
"Life will always have new challenge but when the going gets tough, the tough get going. Bella Wisdom Wealth repeated her motto to herself. Blinking back the tears that were about to drop as she looked at her reflection in the full length mirror.
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All readers, pay attention to this novel. It was an amazing piece of art and I am imressed by its story. Maybe you should try to and have fun while reading. Character development was good and the story was captivating! Nice!
The plot, the characters are so amazing, again the suspense is very captivating you will not know what will happen next. Each character has there own uniqueness and mind blowing. I love the way the author allows us to see the mind or rather what the character are thinking in their mind.💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍
The story is quite interesting and characters are quite relatable. I love the stability and the uniqueness of the novel. The suspends is unique, I can't even determine what will happen next. I love the characters development, especially the way each characters are been introduced. The use of multiple narrator is interesting. I don't really enjoy some repetition, due to the point of view. If you need something fresh this book is for you. It intriguing [img=recommend][img=update]
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I love everything about this story it's really entertaining , the character the suspense the settings was great . The way the characters are introduce there was no disconnection .l could not take my eyes off till I got to the last chapter for now can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded
The Good: The characters are well thought out, nothing amazing, but they fit the story perfectly. (And fitting the story is more important than anything else if you ask me) The Bad: Very difficult to read. Switching the point of view over and over is painful. The walls of text without proper speaking quotes makes it even harder to read. I have a hard time picking out the story in this, but that might just be me. Fixing the grammar in the Synopsis will also attract more readers. The Neutral: I have a hard time immersing myself in this world, it feels bland. Still, this feels like the author's first novel so keep writing and you will improve! I would also recommend Grammarly or something similar to help with your sentences and vocabulary. Good work!
Good work on this novel :D The emotions reach me like an arrow to a bullseye The characters are totally relatable and the plot is worth following up on. Keep it up! :D
Some good writing! I like how thoughtful the narrative is, it really makes it enjoyable to read. I love learning about the protagonists thoughts and emotions, it really adds another level to the book. I think the plot is good, as well as character dynamics! Fantastic work! Just be careful with grammar and maybe use some quotation marks?
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This story is so close to home and quite unpredictable as well. Am here wondering how the will reading would look like. Keep updating I would be right back to continue reading.
The plot is so captivating. I am some who easily gusse what will happen next but it quit interesting to be taking by a few surprise.you should check the book out.[img=recommend][img=update]