Getting Better With My Other Self
Amidst the fight going on between humans and mythical creatures, two personalities has been deemed worthy to fight for the better.
Alex Pine, a guy with a weak body but has a really powerful flame that he himself couldn't reach its limit. Owen Grace is a mysterious person who'd first came out dating the one of the most powerful guild leaders, He has an ordinary ice ability but he is capable of using it to his very advantage.
This two despite not knowing anything about each other would fight together and become the strongest no possibly the most omnipotent creature who had existed.
Note: This novel would have a lot of typographical errors but please still read it:)
....And If you are the owner of the picture I used just tell me then I'll willingly take it down.
Really quality writing! Super impressed with this one; I havent spotted really any grammar or spelling mistakes so far - the story is really gripping. Also, I love Vampires!
I loved the story , in my opinion the author drew a very beautiful picture with his words . there were few errors here and there but i am fine with it , cause i know it is difficult to write . this book is definitely worth reading. good luck author.
My, this plot is very nice. This novel is capable of being extremely interesting and I can actually see it being adapted into a comic. However, the multiple errors are a huge turnoff. There's more than a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Almost all sentences are without end marks. The synopsis was short and extremely confusing. There's no problem with a short synopsis but the writer has to make it understandable, interesting and intriguing. Going into the novel, some areas were just as confusing since you worded a few things weird. The story flowed but not well. As the reader, I was not really introduced to anything, it was as if the writer expected us to already know most things about the world of the character. Overall, this novel has a very creative plot and the writer's intentions are clear. I hope the author can work on their shortcomings and only get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]
You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential
This is humorous and exciting! I actually admire your style in describing scenes and characters. This is really great. I added it to library waiting for more!
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