Kin To Shadows

it's cool and shikamaru as the oc is unique but the poor English really hurts the story and makes it difficult to sit though some parts I highly recommend finding someone to edit the fic

Disgusting... What kind of writing style is this? As if a 10-year-old child was put at the keyboard and asked to write how he would live in different universes

it's interesting, really, but it's more of a monologue, apart from that after a while the interactions seem exaggerated and superfluous, it ends up not making much sense, too much information, too much rhetoric, too much randomness. In the end, the concept is good, but very poorly executed.

Didn’t want to give myself 5 stars because i know i don't deserve it and didn’t want to give myself the lower than four because that would ruin my day. But please, You guys can honestly rate the story

A really great story. ThenMc doesn't act stupid, he is realistic, and also has a great sense of humor if I say so myself. All in all, a good story to read.

A preety good story and we don’t see shikamaru as an oc as much as i would like and he has powers but not something over the top and the timing for power ups and training time is very reasonable definitely the best shikamaru oc out there

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I didn't notice its finally been updated. Yes oh my god all of my yes. Loving it keep up the good work. Very realistic story. Will be giving my votes/power stones whatever here from now on.

the novel is a mess I hope you could string together all the beads of ideas you have I see potential in your writing but it is all over the place all the best keep going

I always like to look at new perspectives on what happens when the element of intelligence and absurdity is implemented. This story has exactly that, and I liked it. lol lol

Just coz like the story so i rate all 5 stars, hope that MC becomes OP overall especially in IQ & Wisdom. Hope that it completes without dropping.

The concept for training and system and the choice of character were quite interesting, however when he begins to show off in front of other people and performs his techniques becomes a little cringe. Not very smart and rather difficult to believe in.

dropping because he is hiding his power

it's cool and shikamaru as the oc is unique but the poor English really hurts the story and makes it difficult to sit though some parts I highly recommend finding someone to edit the fic