My Harem Is Not What I Expected!
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MC Rune Argentus wants to leave his village for a more exciting life as an adventurer, only things turn out a lot different than he thought they would. A power he shouldn't have, a bloodline hidden from him by his parents, and various women vying for his affection. Rune learns that not everything is as it seems as he's slowly dragged into an ancient conflict.
Sexual Content warning: this novel contains content of the R-18 nature and might not be for everyone. All characters appearing in this novel are 18 years and over, despite what the text may say.
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Volume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : The Journey Begins
- Character Records1yr
- 1A New Day [Revised]1yr
- 2Rune Argentus & World Origins [Revised]1yr
- 3Rune Argentus 2 [Revised]1yr
- 4Preparations1yr
- 5Stella Sidra 11yr
- 6Stella Sidra 21yr
- 7Festival Prelude1yr
- 8Summer Harvest Festival1yr
- 9A Painful First Time 11yr
- 10A Painful First Time 2 [R-18]1yr
- 11Aftermath1yr
- 12Arrival1yr
- 13Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 11yr
- 14Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 21yr
- 15Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 31yr
- 16A Close Call1yr
- 17Meeting The Roommates 11yr
- 18Meeting The Roommates 21yr
- 19Raya & Luna 11yr
- 20Raya and Luna 21yr
- 21Meeting With The Headmaster Again1yr
- 22Planning A Path1yr
- 23Revelations 11yr
- 24Revelations 2 [R-18]1yr
- 25An Awkward Outing1yr
- 26An Awkward Outing 2 [R-18]1yr
- 27The Start of Classes1yr
- 28A Sparring Session With Carin1yr
- 29Two of a Kind1yr
- 30Coming To An Agreement1yr
- 31Trouble in Swim Class1yr
- 32Mesmerizing Foxen1yr
- 33Regaining Clarity1yr
- 34Raya's Care [R-18]1yr
- 35Moving Forward1yr
- 36Second Day1yr
- 37Starting Body Activation Training1yr
- 38End of the Second Day1yr
- 39Memories of a Fated Past1yr
- 40An Update On Days Gone By1yr
- 41The First Beasts1yr
- 42Flirting and Fighting 11yr
- 43Flirting & Fighting 21yr
- 44Flirting & Fighting 31yr
- 45Fleur's night 1 [R-18]1yr
- 46Fleur's Night 2 [R-18]1yr
- 47A Chaotically Fun Morning1yr
- 48Accompanying Raya1yr
- 49Approaching Exam1yr
- 50Third Encounter1yr
- 51Chaos in Ant Tunnel 11yr
- 52Chaos in Ant Tunnel 21yr
- 53On The Brink 11yr
- 54On The Brink 21yr
- 55A New Conflict1yr
Volume 2 : War & Tournaments
- Character Records1yr
- 1A New Day [Revised]1yr
- 2Rune Argentus & World Origins [Revised]1yr
- 3Rune Argentus 2 [Revised]1yr
- 4Preparations1yr
- 5Stella Sidra 11yr
- 6Stella Sidra 21yr
- 7Festival Prelude1yr
- 8Summer Harvest Festival1yr
- 9A Painful First Time 11yr
- 10A Painful First Time 2 [R-18]1yr
- 11Aftermath1yr
- 12Arrival1yr
- 13Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 11yr
- 14Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 21yr
- 15Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 31yr
- 16A Close Call1yr
- 17Meeting The Roommates 11yr
- 18Meeting The Roommates 21yr
- 19Raya & Luna 11yr
- 20Raya and Luna 21yr
- 21Meeting With The Headmaster Again1yr
- 22Planning A Path1yr
- 23Revelations 11yr
- 24Revelations 2 [R-18]1yr
- 25An Awkward Outing1yr
- 26An Awkward Outing 2 [R-18]1yr
- 27The Start of Classes1yr
- 28A Sparring Session With Carin1yr
- 29Two of a Kind1yr
- 30Coming To An Agreement1yr
- 31Trouble in Swim Class1yr
- 32Mesmerizing Foxen1yr
- 33Regaining Clarity1yr
- 34Raya's Care [R-18]1yr
- 35Moving Forward1yr
- 36Second Day1yr
- 37Starting Body Activation Training1yr
- 38End of the Second Day1yr
- 39Memories of a Fated Past1yr
- 40An Update On Days Gone By1yr
- 41The First Beasts1yr
- 42Flirting and Fighting 11yr
- 43Flirting & Fighting 21yr
- 44Flirting & Fighting 31yr
- 45Fleur's night 1 [R-18]1yr
- 46Fleur's Night 2 [R-18]1yr
- 47A Chaotically Fun Morning1yr
- 48Accompanying Raya1yr
- 49Approaching Exam1yr
- 50Third Encounter1yr
- 51Chaos in Ant Tunnel 11yr
- 52Chaos in Ant Tunnel 21yr
- 53On The Brink 11yr
- 54On The Brink 21yr
- 55A New Conflict1yr
- 56Slipping Through The Cracks1yr
- 57Five Days1yr
- 58Vivienne's Aftercare [R-18]1yr
- 59Special Assignment1yr
- 60Reunion1yr
- 61Departing For Oto1yr
- 62Arrival1yr
- 63An Eccentric Ruler 11yr
- 64An Eccentric Ruler 21yr
- 65An Eccentric Ruler 31yr
- 66An Eccentric Ruler 41yr
- 67A Strange Little Creature1yr
- 68Faithful Servants1yr
- 69A Talk With The Empress 11yr
- 70A Talk With The Empress 21yr
- 71Reasons For His Selection 11yr
- 72Reasons For His Selection 21yr
- 73Punishment1yr
- 74Premonition1yr
- 75First Battle1yr
- 76General Wrock1yr
- 77Gamble & Clean Up1yr
- 78Carin's Thoughts1yr
- 79Luna's Resolve 11yr
- 80Luna's Resolve 21yr
- 81Resisting Temptation [R-18]1yr
- 82Fleur's Journey1yr
- 83Fleur's Curse of Love 11yr
- 84Fleur's Curse of Love 21yr
- 85Fleur's Curse of Love 31yr
- 86Fleur's Curse of Love 41yr
- 87Aspect of the Heart1yr
- 88Trial of the Heart 11yr
- 89Trial of the Heart 21yr
- 90Trial of the Heart 31yr
- 91Trial of the Heart 41yr
- 92Trial of the Heart (Final)1yr
- 93Side Story: Phantom of a Forgotten Mother1yr
- 94Arriving at Hanabi Shrine1yr
- 95Interlude: Moving Pieces on the Board1yr
- 96Infiltrating Hanabi Shrine1yr
- 97Anticlimactic?1yr
- 98Battle Against An Unknown Beast 11yr
- 99Battle Against An Unknown Beast 21yr
- 100Battle Against An Unknown beast [Final]1yr
- 101Much Needed Rest1yr
- 102Wake-up Call1yr
- 103Pent-Up [R-18]1yr
- 104Releasing Built Up Desire [R-18]1yr
- 105What Goes Around Comes Around [R-18]1yr
- 106Dominated [R-18]1yr
- 107Avoiding Drama1yr
- 108Meeting with an Old Friend1yr
- 109Trap and Encounter1yr
- 110The Final Struggle 11yr
- 111The Final Struggle 21yr
- 112The Final Struggle 31yr
- 113A Girl Born On The Battlefield 11yr
- 114A Girl Born On the Battlefield 21yr
- 115The Final Struggle 41yr
- 116The Final Struggle 51yr
- 117Interlude1yr
- 118Climax: Sisters [part 1]1yr
- 119Climax: Sisters [part2]1yr
- 120Climax: Master and Student1yr
- 121Climax: Master and Student [part2]1yr
- 122The Price of Power1yr
- 123The Price of Power 21yr
- 124Girl's Talk1yr
- 125Girl's Talk 21yr
- 126On Their Own1yr
- 127On Their Own 21yr
- 128Always Double Check1yr
- 129Not So Simple Maids12mth
- 130Clash of Beasts12mth
- 131Priestess Army vs Barrier Eaters12mth
- 132Climax: End of the War 112mth
- 133Climax: End of the War 212mth
- 134Motivations12mth
- 135Rune Wakes Up11mth
- 136A New Assigment11mth
- 137Regrowth Potion11mth
- 138Carin Again [R-18]11mth
- 139Tables Turned? [R-18]11mth
- 140Rivals and Alliances11mth
- 141Fears of Weakness11mth
- 142Resuming Mind Activation Training11mth
- 143Carin's Tough Love11mth
- 144Girls Talk 311mth
- 145Blooming Feelings11mth
- 146Regaining Respect11mth
- 147Plans for Intimacy [R-18]11mth
- 148With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 149With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 150With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 151With Luna [R-18(Final)]10mth
- 152Morning After an Intense Night [R-18]10mth
- 153Secrets Kept and Secrets Revealed10mth
- 154A Lively Morning10mth
- 155Last Chance to Master the Technique10mth
- 156First Day of the Tournament: Festivities10mth
- 157First Day of the Tournament: Festivities10mth
- 158More Women, More Problems10mth
- 159The One Taking Her Place10mth
- 160Speech & Boredom10mth
- 161In public with Fleur [R-18]10mth
- 162Encounter in the Park10mth
- 163Teacher Vs Teacher10mth
- 164Teacher Vs Teacher 210mth
- 165End of the First Day9mth
- 166Stella's Struggles 19mth
- 167Stella's Struggles 29mth
- 168Stella's Struggles 39mth
- 169Day 3: Troubles and Sweetness9mth
- 170Day 3: Swift Death9mth
- 171Day 3: Preliminaries9mth
- 172Day 3: Preliminaries [R-18]9mth
- 173Day 3: Group Prelims8mth
- 174Day 3: Vs Sonia8mth
- 175Day 3: Match on Hold8mth
- 176Before the Rematch 18mth
- 177Before the Rematch 28mth
- 178Gallow Kalor8mth
- 179Day 3: Rematch with Sonia8mth
- 180Gallow and Maria8mth
- 181End of the Third Day [R-18]8mth
- 182Checking In On Miriam8mth
- 183A Talk with Miriam8mth
- 184Day 4: Calm Before the Storm8mth
- 185Day 4: Calm Before the Storm8mth
- 186[R18] Night Before the Finals8mth
- 187[R18] Night Before the Finals8mth
- 188Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 189Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 190Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 191Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 192Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 193Day 5: Finding Out Her Secret7mth
- 194Day 5: Rune Vs Zictor7mth
- 195Day 5: Rune Vs Zictor7mth
- 196Rune Vs Zictor (Conclusion)7mth
- 197A Short Rest [R-18]7mth
- 198Day 5: The Last Match (R-18)7mth
- 199Day 5: The Last Match7mth
- 200Day 5: The Last Match7mth
- 201Day 5: The Last Match6mth
- 202Day 5: The Last Match6mth
- 203Day 5: climax6mth
- 204Changes [R-18]6mth
- 205The Award Ceremony6mth
- 206Various Meetings6mth
- 207Various Meetings 26mth
- 208Various Meetings 36mth
- 209With Mako [R-18]6mth
- 210Various Meetings 46mth
- 211Meeting with the Kaiser6mth
Volume 3 : Mercenary Rebellion
- Character Records1yr
- 1A New Day [Revised]1yr
- 2Rune Argentus & World Origins [Revised]1yr
- 3Rune Argentus 2 [Revised]1yr
- 4Preparations1yr
- 5Stella Sidra 11yr
- 6Stella Sidra 21yr
- 7Festival Prelude1yr
- 8Summer Harvest Festival1yr
- 9A Painful First Time 11yr
- 10A Painful First Time 2 [R-18]1yr
- 11Aftermath1yr
- 12Arrival1yr
- 13Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 11yr
- 14Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 21yr
- 15Meeting with a Virgin Killer Headmaster 31yr
- 16A Close Call1yr
- 17Meeting The Roommates 11yr
- 18Meeting The Roommates 21yr
- 19Raya & Luna 11yr
- 20Raya and Luna 21yr
- 21Meeting With The Headmaster Again1yr
- 22Planning A Path1yr
- 23Revelations 11yr
- 24Revelations 2 [R-18]1yr
- 25An Awkward Outing1yr
- 26An Awkward Outing 2 [R-18]1yr
- 27The Start of Classes1yr
- 28A Sparring Session With Carin1yr
- 29Two of a Kind1yr
- 30Coming To An Agreement1yr
- 31Trouble in Swim Class1yr
- 32Mesmerizing Foxen1yr
- 33Regaining Clarity1yr
- 34Raya's Care [R-18]1yr
- 35Moving Forward1yr
- 36Second Day1yr
- 37Starting Body Activation Training1yr
- 38End of the Second Day1yr
- 39Memories of a Fated Past1yr
- 40An Update On Days Gone By1yr
- 41The First Beasts1yr
- 42Flirting and Fighting 11yr
- 43Flirting & Fighting 21yr
- 44Flirting & Fighting 31yr
- 45Fleur's night 1 [R-18]1yr
- 46Fleur's Night 2 [R-18]1yr
- 47A Chaotically Fun Morning1yr
- 48Accompanying Raya1yr
- 49Approaching Exam1yr
- 50Third Encounter1yr
- 51Chaos in Ant Tunnel 11yr
- 52Chaos in Ant Tunnel 21yr
- 53On The Brink 11yr
- 54On The Brink 21yr
- 55A New Conflict1yr
- 56Slipping Through The Cracks1yr
- 57Five Days1yr
- 58Vivienne's Aftercare [R-18]1yr
- 59Special Assignment1yr
- 60Reunion1yr
- 61Departing For Oto1yr
- 62Arrival1yr
- 63An Eccentric Ruler 11yr
- 64An Eccentric Ruler 21yr
- 65An Eccentric Ruler 31yr
- 66An Eccentric Ruler 41yr
- 67A Strange Little Creature1yr
- 68Faithful Servants1yr
- 69A Talk With The Empress 11yr
- 70A Talk With The Empress 21yr
- 71Reasons For His Selection 11yr
- 72Reasons For His Selection 21yr
- 73Punishment1yr
- 74Premonition1yr
- 75First Battle1yr
- 76General Wrock1yr
- 77Gamble & Clean Up1yr
- 78Carin's Thoughts1yr
- 79Luna's Resolve 11yr
- 80Luna's Resolve 21yr
- 81Resisting Temptation [R-18]1yr
- 82Fleur's Journey1yr
- 83Fleur's Curse of Love 11yr
- 84Fleur's Curse of Love 21yr
- 85Fleur's Curse of Love 31yr
- 86Fleur's Curse of Love 41yr
- 87Aspect of the Heart1yr
- 88Trial of the Heart 11yr
- 89Trial of the Heart 21yr
- 90Trial of the Heart 31yr
- 91Trial of the Heart 41yr
- 92Trial of the Heart (Final)1yr
- 93Side Story: Phantom of a Forgotten Mother1yr
- 94Arriving at Hanabi Shrine1yr
- 95Interlude: Moving Pieces on the Board1yr
- 96Infiltrating Hanabi Shrine1yr
- 97Anticlimactic?1yr
- 98Battle Against An Unknown Beast 11yr
- 99Battle Against An Unknown Beast 21yr
- 100Battle Against An Unknown beast [Final]1yr
- 101Much Needed Rest1yr
- 102Wake-up Call1yr
- 103Pent-Up [R-18]1yr
- 104Releasing Built Up Desire [R-18]1yr
- 105What Goes Around Comes Around [R-18]1yr
- 106Dominated [R-18]1yr
- 107Avoiding Drama1yr
- 108Meeting with an Old Friend1yr
- 109Trap and Encounter1yr
- 110The Final Struggle 11yr
- 111The Final Struggle 21yr
- 112The Final Struggle 31yr
- 113A Girl Born On The Battlefield 11yr
- 114A Girl Born On the Battlefield 21yr
- 115The Final Struggle 41yr
- 116The Final Struggle 51yr
- 117Interlude1yr
- 118Climax: Sisters [part 1]1yr
- 119Climax: Sisters [part2]1yr
- 120Climax: Master and Student1yr
- 121Climax: Master and Student [part2]1yr
- 122The Price of Power1yr
- 123The Price of Power 21yr
- 124Girl's Talk1yr
- 125Girl's Talk 21yr
- 126On Their Own1yr
- 127On Their Own 21yr
- 128Always Double Check1yr
- 129Not So Simple Maids12mth
- 130Clash of Beasts12mth
- 131Priestess Army vs Barrier Eaters12mth
- 132Climax: End of the War 112mth
- 133Climax: End of the War 212mth
- 134Motivations12mth
- 135Rune Wakes Up11mth
- 136A New Assigment11mth
- 137Regrowth Potion11mth
- 138Carin Again [R-18]11mth
- 139Tables Turned? [R-18]11mth
- 140Rivals and Alliances11mth
- 141Fears of Weakness11mth
- 142Resuming Mind Activation Training11mth
- 143Carin's Tough Love11mth
- 144Girls Talk 311mth
- 145Blooming Feelings11mth
- 146Regaining Respect11mth
- 147Plans for Intimacy [R-18]11mth
- 148With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 149With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 150With Luna [R-18]10mth
- 151With Luna [R-18(Final)]10mth
- 152Morning After an Intense Night [R-18]10mth
- 153Secrets Kept and Secrets Revealed10mth
- 154A Lively Morning10mth
- 155Last Chance to Master the Technique10mth
- 156First Day of the Tournament: Festivities10mth
- 157First Day of the Tournament: Festivities10mth
- 158More Women, More Problems10mth
- 159The One Taking Her Place10mth
- 160Speech & Boredom10mth
- 161In public with Fleur [R-18]10mth
- 162Encounter in the Park10mth
- 163Teacher Vs Teacher10mth
- 164Teacher Vs Teacher 210mth
- 165End of the First Day9mth
- 166Stella's Struggles 19mth
- 167Stella's Struggles 29mth
- 168Stella's Struggles 39mth
- 169Day 3: Troubles and Sweetness9mth
- 170Day 3: Swift Death9mth
- 171Day 3: Preliminaries9mth
- 172Day 3: Preliminaries [R-18]9mth
- 173Day 3: Group Prelims8mth
- 174Day 3: Vs Sonia8mth
- 175Day 3: Match on Hold8mth
- 176Before the Rematch 18mth
- 177Before the Rematch 28mth
- 178Gallow Kalor8mth
- 179Day 3: Rematch with Sonia8mth
- 180Gallow and Maria8mth
- 181End of the Third Day [R-18]8mth
- 182Checking In On Miriam8mth
- 183A Talk with Miriam8mth
- 184Day 4: Calm Before the Storm8mth
- 185Day 4: Calm Before the Storm8mth
- 186[R18] Night Before the Finals8mth
- 187[R18] Night Before the Finals8mth
- 188Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 189Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 190Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 191Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 192Day 5: Festival Fun8mth
- 193Day 5: Finding Out Her Secret7mth
- 194Day 5: Rune Vs Zictor7mth
- 195Day 5: Rune Vs Zictor7mth
- 196Rune Vs Zictor (Conclusion)7mth
- 197A Short Rest [R-18]7mth
- 198Day 5: The Last Match (R-18)7mth
- 199Day 5: The Last Match7mth
- 200Day 5: The Last Match7mth
- 201Day 5: The Last Match6mth
- 202Day 5: The Last Match6mth
- 203Day 5: climax6mth
- 204Changes [R-18]6mth
- 205The Award Ceremony6mth
- 206Various Meetings6mth
- 207Various Meetings 26mth
- 208Various Meetings 36mth
- 209With Mako [R-18]6mth
- 210Various Meetings 46mth
- 211Meeting with the Kaiser6mth
- 212Stella Wakes Up6mth
- 213How It All Started5mth
- 214How It All Started 25mth
- 215Three Years5mth
- 216Treasure Dungeon5mth
- 217Back to Base5mth
- 218Punishing a Shameless Turtle5mth
- 219For now...Just Focus on This [R-18]5mth
- 220The Next Job5mth
- 221Minor Trouble at the Guild5mth
- 222Before the Hunt5mth
- 223Weapons of Old5mth
- 224Hunting a Ruin Mimic5mth
- 225Hunting a Ruin Mimic5mth
- 226Hunting a Ruin Mimic5mth
- 227Hunting a Ruin Mimic5mth
- 228Saved5mth
- 229Resurfacing Hesitation4mth
- 230His Fears and Her Growth4mth
- 231Ranking Up4mth
- 232Want to Come With Me?4mth
- 233Plans to Meet Up4mth
- 234Please Don't Imitate Fleur!4mth
- 235Confronting Raya4mth
- 236Double Bunnies [R-18]4mth
- 237Double Bunnies 2 [R-18]4mth
- 238Stella's Progress4mth
- 239Stella's Progress 24mth
- 240Setting out4mth
- 241Serpents and Serpent Girls4mth
- 242Serpents and Serpent Girls 24mth
- 243Serpents and Serpent Girls 34mth
- 244Serpents and Serpent Girls 44mth
- 245Serpents and Serpent Girls 54mth
- 246On to the Next4mth
- 247Stopping by the Forge3mth
- 248Limited Zone3mth
- 249Combating the Sea3mth
- 250Combating the Sea 23mth
- 251Combating the Sea 33mth
- 252Combating the Sea 43mth
- 253Combating the Sea 53mth
- 254Sahagin Ecology3mth
- 255Rune Abducted?3mth
- 256Almost [R-18]3mth
- 257How They Are Related3mth
- 258New Gear3mth
- 259Black Lighting [R-18]3mth
- 260Deep Snatcher Ecology3mth
- 261Unprecedented Danger3mth
- 262Unprecedented Danger 23mth
- 263Unprecedented Danger 33mth
- 264Approaching3mth
- 265Prelude to Battle3mth
- 266Shadow and Blue2mth
- 267Shadow and Blue 22mth
- 268Interlude2mth
- 269Waking Up [R-18]2mth
- 270The Inhabitants of Nereid2mth
- 271The Inhabitants of Nereid 22mth
- 272The Inhabitants of Nereid 32mth
- 273The Inhabitants of Nereid 42mth
- 274Tracking the Mercenaries2mth
- 275Confrontation2mth
- 276Anger x Conflict2mth
- 277Audience with the Council2mth
- 278Imposter2mth
- 279Consequences2mth
- 280Resting at the Estate2mth
- 281Parents2mth
- 282Deals & Relationships 12mth
- 283Deals & Relationships 22mth
- 284Deals & Relationships 32mth
- 285Deals & Relationships 41mth
- 286The Other Side 11mth
- 287The Other Side 21mth
- 288Getting a Bit Forceful1mth
- 289Getting a Bit Forceful [R-18]1mth
- 290Interlude: A Secret Talk1mth
- 291With Rienn [R-18]1mth
- 292With Rienn [R-18]1mth
- 293Morning After1mth
- 294A Mother's Embrace1mth
- 295Restrictions1mth
- 296Preperations for Battle1mth
- 297Descending Deep29d
- 298Conflict in the Deep26d
- 299Conflict in the Deep24d
- 300Conflict in the Deep19d
- 301Conflict in the Deep18d
- 302Conflict in the Deep14d
- 303Paths Converging11d
I'm giving the novel 5/5 because it's an incredible attempt at a first novel. It has some issues and the grammar needs work, so it's not my daily reading, but it's stellar for someone's first attempt at writing. I hope the author continues writing because they have a lot of potential. I'll look forward to future works. Cheers!
I have no complaints about the novel other than the stupid MC. (I suspect the MC is a girl.) The pace of events is good. The characters are colorful and pleasant. Characters with feelings and thoughts and flaws. I don't know why this novel is not widely read. But with a steady stream, it would make a great novel.
Does it or will it have NTR in it? Also what is your vision for the maximum amount of girls in the harem?
Good novel to read easy to understand New race of a character for me and very simple description.
Solid writing and story with a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall it’ a great story so far, well done
Quite enjoyable of a read in the free chapters, considering unlocking more