Game Of Thrones: Dragons Rule Again

Is English not your first language? this is an unreadable mess. Run on sentences, no paragraphs, no proper quotations and separations for spoken words. I mean what I was able to read seemed like it might be good but the atrocious grammar ruins it completely.

Painful to read honestly like the slave masters being able to sell the Dothraki

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one of the best Game of Thrones fan fiction available to read. yes the writing could be better at times but the author himself was honest that he came back to writing after a long time so it's manageable . But by heavens the way the author is building up the world is absolutely incredible 🙌

I lost brain cells reading this it was so bad

The story seemed interesting until you read a few sentences. Don't know if English isn't the author's first language. But there are a lot of spelling mistakes, broken paragraphs or sentences, even chapters are painstakingly short, which doesn't even progress the story or add substance in some way. I'd recommend reading other works to see how they structure or outline their stories.

The use of lol like a nervous tick and the lack of elijahs eloquence makes it stupid if you are writing a character we all know and love u have to do it well and this is annoying sorry mate its just not for me

novelmu jelek penulis, terlalu banyak kekuatan untuk dunia seperti game of thrones, ditambah setiap bab terlalu pendek, dan cerita berkembang terlalu cepat