Hold over Myriad of Worlds
Author: Tominii
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All those who gather inside Hold's walls have different purposes and principles, but in the end, they are united in one idea: "to move forward without regretting what was left behind".
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the writing can get some work, also can you place sign for who's talking. it quite over the place...
The protagonist is a being similar to a God but he does not act like one, he is boring, he can solve problems easily but he lets others do it by meaninglessly prolonging situations, many times he does not seem to be that strong but it is always said that I could destroy a planet, I already mentioned it but it's boring to read again about a protagonist who doesn't like to attract attention, that is, the guy walks around with his eyes closed because he doesn't like how people see him, you're thousands of years old and that bothers you. stupidity. Nor is it possible to distinguish who is speaking in the dialogues, the verbs are conjugated incorrectly, etc.
Just the grammar needs work but I like what you’re writing.