Okay...if you don't like harem then don't read this Fan-fic because this is literally a Harem Fan-fc and also for those who doesn't like NTR not really sure if i would put one who not really recommended for those who doesn't like it. And give me some review so i can make this story better and this is a world travel Fan-fic just so you know, because i hate being stuck in one world more like i had a limited idea on it, and i won't get bored anyways that all thank you for reading!
5 years ago
69
DevourerOfSouls
I do not understand these authors who break the MC emotionally and physically, so that afterwards he can get over it, I am sure that a normal person who was betrayed once, would not have the courage to have a harem, this story seems to be very unrealistic. I won't be reading.
5 years ago
63
Suriel8224
It's so boring. Mc still so trustful and what the fvk is this ****ty ruthless mc tag. He's only ruthless on ants. And it's funny on chapter 2 that when he looks on girls they blushes lol. He just got cucked hahahaha
5 years ago
50
Kenrio
Super random reason to gain a system☑️
Extremely stupid and jerk mc☑️
The most generic system☑️
The girls fall in love with The mc without a logical reason☑️
The mc gain power and items in the most convenient way possible☑️
5 years ago
45
NakedFury
I am really story you had to read this story. It is a turd, a steaming turd with zero redeeming qualities or any originality tied to it.
From horrible inexcusable bad grammar to mediocre plot and characters.
Your time is wasted here, please leave your 1 star review and leave to find some higher quality stories elsewhere.
5 years ago
18
jeanpierregerardo
- "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein).
- ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse).
- fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion).
- naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan).
- bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki).
- shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana).
- one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock).
- fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)).
- Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya).
- soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn).
- nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin).
- hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima)
- damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein).
- shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman).
- "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki).
- "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke).
-"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters).
-·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami).
-·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos).
-·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online).
-·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki).
-mushuko tensei.
-"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei).
-·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll).
-(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/).
etc
5 years ago
15
newt
The history isn't developed in an smooth way, it just throw everything in the reader expecting it to make sense, seems like the autor isn't preoccupied in make it smooth but in making it a storm of cool things together
5 years ago
14
AbsoluteLoli_Lover
a horrible story **** the protagonist does not keep anything and is always helping others without asking for anything change and that is always angry if the guy almost always laughs at everything
5 years ago
13
skulputulurubug
I read only till revenge chapters, this feels like an angry wish fulfilment novel mc has an inconsistent personality the women are all thirsty like hell. I'd recommend reading this when you're angry and bored, some words need to be checked
5 years ago
10
Shadowles_Immortal
first of all why does the author say am making him a cold personality type of character next thing you know mc is showing off his sword and trying to impress a Loli and from their his mentality keeps degrading to a ****. author really needs to learn how to stick to a personality on his mc. still I give credit to author for trying to write and improve from their. So in total it's a DECENT story in MY opinion.
4 years ago
9
idle_enthusiast
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
9
HinataBitchAkamaru
make a great harem don't limit it, please hate the authors who leave beautiful women behind
****************************************************************************
5 years ago
7
Rain_Miko
I'm come here from u other are to see u created ,, btw hope u get all harem "I'm fans of harem" lol ,,, with power of harem u story will be harem 🤣🤣🤣🤣
5 years ago
6
TrueImmortalDevil
ok ... so writing quality is 1 star ... story development is 2 stars ... character design i wish i could put 0 but 1 is the lowest ... no comment on stability since i only read for an hour or so ... world background is 2stars cause it is a fanfic with already established worlds
5 years ago
5
Kriuswer
For real. I looked into this novel because I saw my favorite anime character Merlin on the cover. And I thought it would start typically, God matters. However, it started differently and I will say that I liked it. The whole strong scene at the beginning and the motive of revenge made me read this novel with more pleasure. So thanks for that and I hope you will reach 100 chapters. Keep it up.
Okay...if you don't like harem then don't read this Fan-fic because this is literally a Harem Fan-fc and also for those who doesn't like NTR not really sure if i would put one who not really recommended for those who doesn't like it. And give me some review so i can make this story better and this is a world travel Fan-fic just so you know, because i hate being stuck in one world more like i had a limited idea on it, and i won't get bored anyways that all thank you for reading!
I do not understand these authors who break the MC emotionally and physically, so that afterwards he can get over it, I am sure that a normal person who was betrayed once, would not have the courage to have a harem, this story seems to be very unrealistic. I won't be reading.
It's so boring. Mc still so trustful and what the fvk is this ****ty ruthless mc tag. He's only ruthless on ants. And it's funny on chapter 2 that when he looks on girls they blushes lol. He just got cucked hahahaha
Super random reason to gain a system☑️ Extremely stupid and jerk mc☑️ The most generic system☑️ The girls fall in love with The mc without a logical reason☑️ The mc gain power and items in the most convenient way possible☑️
I am really story you had to read this story. It is a turd, a steaming turd with zero redeeming qualities or any originality tied to it. From horrible inexcusable bad grammar to mediocre plot and characters. Your time is wasted here, please leave your 1 star review and leave to find some higher quality stories elsewhere.
- "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -mushuko tensei. -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
The history isn't developed in an smooth way, it just throw everything in the reader expecting it to make sense, seems like the autor isn't preoccupied in make it smooth but in making it a storm of cool things together
a horrible story **** the protagonist does not keep anything and is always helping others without asking for anything change and that is always angry if the guy almost always laughs at everything
I read only till revenge chapters, this feels like an angry wish fulfilment novel mc has an inconsistent personality the women are all thirsty like hell. I'd recommend reading this when you're angry and bored, some words need to be checked
first of all why does the author say am making him a cold personality type of character next thing you know mc is showing off his sword and trying to impress a Loli and from their his mentality keeps degrading to a ****. author really needs to learn how to stick to a personality on his mc. still I give credit to author for trying to write and improve from their. So in total it's a DECENT story in MY opinion.
Reveal Spoiler
make a great harem don't limit it, please hate the authors who leave beautiful women behind ****************************************************************************
I'm come here from u other are to see u created ,, btw hope u get all harem "I'm fans of harem" lol ,,, with power of harem u story will be harem 🤣🤣🤣🤣
ok ... so writing quality is 1 star ... story development is 2 stars ... character design i wish i could put 0 but 1 is the lowest ... no comment on stability since i only read for an hour or so ... world background is 2stars cause it is a fanfic with already established worlds
For real. I looked into this novel because I saw my favorite anime character Merlin on the cover. And I thought it would start typically, God matters. However, it started differently and I will say that I liked it. The whole strong scene at the beginning and the motive of revenge made me read this novel with more pleasure. So thanks for that and I hope you will reach 100 chapters. Keep it up.