Fate DxD:Archer Reborn

ok just gotta say this, WHY THE FUCK DID YOU ADD EMIYA AS A SERVANT THAT IS THE MOST ANNOYING THING YA COULD'VE DONE WITH A FATE X DXD COMBO UTTER GARBAGE

While the grammars are a bit stiff, This novel is good. I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body and fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to death, Nor known to life I have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet this hands will never hold anything so as i pray, Unlimited blade works And also, Sakura Tohsaka when?

Updates are little slow, but story is good, at least in my books. (If any body thinks differently, no offence, every has their own tastes after all! )

there are some plot holes in the story like you revive shirou with 7 pawns + 1 knight. from what i remember and read on the evil pieces in its description. you cannot use different pieces to revive some. like what you did to shirou. please fix that by using a mutation piece. and some stiff grammar. i know you will improve as you write. then return to your early chapters to fix the errors and edit some details to make it better.

I fanfic author Euclid give you my support, Please give me some of your english to complete my fanfic . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Honestly, i am disappointed, seeing emiya like a looser virgin and surving a spoiled brat for no reason he could repay his debt by breaking her marriage. so he could be free from the debt he owe to rias for saving his life and then just remove his connection with her and became free. But he choose to be simping around. What a drag!!!!

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

Rus : Скажу честно , мне нравятся такие варианты фанфика про DxD где в их мир поподает Широ , но в этой истории мне ненравится то что он сразу очень сильный , это убивает его уникальность , все мы прекрасно знаем что Широ всегда побеждал не благодаря тому что он очень сильный , а благодоря его универсальности , а здесь ему и делать ничего не надо , захотел создать Драйга , создал , захотел создать Создателя уничтожения ,создал , таким темпом он и до святого грааля с трихексой дойдёт

Good novel. ..........,.........................................mm.m..o i u y yg,zvVshdhehehshshsbdiuuuy😉🤩😑😑 hhjhjjj go usus Dig di ci ci ci di di di

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work

i will give this a try as i love both fate/kaleid and DxD. Plus i hated what happened to Chloe... lastly. its such a waste that this does not have lemons/Rl8 content....

Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 4 The total score 3.6 Yah, is kinda good but... 1. communication between character is strange like Emiya switches personality too often while disguising he self as he old self. 2. He personality is not strong enough

Its really good bro just the updates could be better and just a tip of advice you should rlly use tags bro they’ll bring in more readers bro

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