When we were perfect

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Author: Amaimsz
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°Amy Moretti:

A stubborn, feisty but kind-hearted girl who works as a criminal lawyer for NIO. She thinks her life is perfect with a loving partner, family, and friends but what she doesn't know is life has its meaning of perfection.



°Daniel Saritas:

Young and sinfully handsome self-made billionaire known as ruthless in the business world. He is a person with a troubled past but hides his emotions to such an extent that people call him ice king, he also happens to be the best friend of Amy Moretti and is secretly in love with her but keeps it one-sided for the sake of of of her happiness.



A certain change of events which includes the death of a loved one and revenge for death leads to both of them getting married.

Join their journey of hatred, secrets, pain, happiness, and promises.

It's a slow burn romance.

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Amaimsz
Amaimsz

Do give my work a chance,you won't be disappointed. It's different from other stories with the male lead being the victim of destiny's cruel games. Warning:You are in for an emotional roller coaster filled with drama,struggle for love and change of personalities.

3 years ago
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Lapraze
Lapraze

3 years ago
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_Yomai_
_Yomai_

3 years ago
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Aleesha_Sakhawat
Aleesha_Sakhawat

This is amazing I really like it. You described everything so well that it seems to be real. I liked the character of Daniel he is epitome of matureness. You write so good keep it up.

3 years ago
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Ayesha_Nadeem_7542
Ayesha_Nadeem_7542

I am really looking forward. Story is saddening but appealing. Especially Daniel what a wonderful person he is shown to be. I hope he gets happiness,he is really heartbroken.🥲

3 years ago
2
Aamna_Sajid
Aamna_Sajid

Wow, never knew you could write it like this. I mean I am genuinely impressed sister. The character development is smooth and I am already in love with Silas. He is literally like me. I hope you put the same effort in remaining novel as you did in the start. Best of luck.♥♥♥

3 years ago
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FieldRead
FieldRead

I enjoyed the story very much. The grammar and lack of editing sometimes was very annoying, but the story was worth it to me.

a year ago
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Nikolas_Ahlers
Nikolas_Ahlers

I liked reading this book. Great characters and thought out plot. Only thing I didn’ like was the one month hiatus because I was really Into the book but overall it was good. Keep up the good work.

3 years ago
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Lee_Sparrow
Lee_Sparrow

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

3 years ago
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reliable_foodpoint
reliable_foodpoint

I think you should give more insight into the surroundings. Maybe try changing the locations it will be more appealing. But no doubt it's a strong plotline you have developed. Keep it up I am here to support you beautiful.😻😻😻

3 years ago
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The_Amna_World
The_Amna_World

Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time 😌. Especially, Daniel, he is shown as serious and broken at the same time. If you add more scenes about his last maybe it will give more inside about what made him like this. Anyhow, the story is amazing looking forward to reading more about it.

3 years ago
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predominantt
predominantt

Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

3 years ago
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Ayesha_5572
Ayesha_5572

What a ride this novel has been. Emotional,heart tickling and beautiful. Keep up the good work author, your writing truly amazes me. Best of luck for future work.❤❤❤

a year ago
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Lillian_Morgan_8902
Lillian_Morgan_8902

I think I will only leave hearts here for this amazing work. 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🏵🏵🏵🏵🏵🌸🌸🌸🌸⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

3 years ago
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Penelope_Octave
Penelope_Octave

I think the pace needs to be fastened a bit but the whole story and plot are fantastic. I love Daniel a lot. He is truly a gold-hearted person.💌💌💌💌💌💌 Sending love.

3 years ago
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