Negative Point
In a world where whispers of magic dance amidst the mundane, a tale unfolds that will challenge the very fabric of reality. The Negative Point beckons, promising the fulfillment of every desire, yet hiding secrets darker than the shadows it casts.
Meet Ryoshi Taisaku, a young dreamer whose yearning for the extraordinary leads him on a perilous journey. In pursuit of the mythical Negative Point, where legend whispers of wishes spun into existence, Ryoshi discovers that destiny's threads are not spun of gold but of enigma and peril.
As Ryoshi ventures forth, the line between fantasy and reality blurs, and the true nature of magic reveals itself in ways he could never have imagined. But amidst the wonders, there lies a darkness, an unknown twist that threatens to unravel not only Ryoshi's journey but the very essence of his being.
In a world where wishes come with a price, and magic is a double-edged sword, Ryoshi's quest for the extraordinary becomes a dance with destiny itself. For at the Negative Point, where dreams and nightmares converge, only the bravest souls dare to tread, and the secrets they unearth may reshape the world forever.
Embark on a journey where every step is fraught with wonder and danger, where the limits of imagination are tested, and where the truest magic lies not in the granting of wishes, but in the journey itself. The Negative Point awaits, beckoning those who dare to dream beyond the confines of reality.
Yes, I am shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review, but I did this to say that please drop an honest review if you're reading this, it'll help a lot, I'm open to criticism.
This story has a lot of potential! Synopsis is really good that i couldn't help but go and read it out of curiosity 😅. The first chapter started off quiet atmospherically though recognising the MC was very easy. Then, we meet the legendary mentor and the MC's journey to greatness begins! Want to know more and the details in between? Read the novel real quick, what are you waiting for?
first chapter is great. thumbs up. Overall: 8/10. I am still reading though
Just started reading, the story has an interesting premise and a relatable MC. The story immediately starts without making us have to wait around, which I like. The magic system is interesting and explained well to the reader. The MC's abilities seem interesting and unique. Will continue reading with interest!
Great story. I don't know why your story doesn't have a contract but its overall wholesome to read.
Solid work! I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together. The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus! Great work!
Overall, it's a good story. I was just scrolling through webnovel and found this book. The first chapter really set the atmosphere. But I have to say this, please use something more attractive as your novel cover. That's my only complaint.
This story has good potential, not so good grammar but still I can see something for it. Now granted, this story gets more views that power stones or reviews but don't stop writing, I took the time out of my day to review this.
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