Core Soldier

Core Soldier

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Author: RidiculousRobinn
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Ren Lennon was thrown in a bright cold room, which in Burtgundy facility, was known as a cell. His body ached, and hardly had the energy to move. With what energy he had, he sat up and looked around in disbelief at what was to be his new home for a very long time. This cell, he regretably had to admit, was better than most. Besides it being deathly cold, it had a bed with a nice thick mattress in the far left corner. In the far right was a sink with a mirror above and a toilet. In the center of the ceiling was a single bright light that lit the room extremely well. That was all, however. The basic necessitites. In the near right corner of the room was a security surveillence camera.

"Better get used to it, soldier. This facility is going to be your hell hole until you die," remarked the guard as a smirk emerged upon his face.



SLAM!



The guard slammed the door shut, sealing Ren within. The sound echoed throughout the room, his heart sinking as he slowly grasped the situation he was in. Shortly after that, the light went out, engulfing Ren in total darkness. He listened to the guards footsteps as he began to walk down the hallway until they grew distant enough that he could hear them no longer.



"DAMNIT!" Ren slamed his fist in the gound as tears began to stream down his face. "Why..... why.... WHY!" On the ground, he curled up into a ball holding his head sobbing. "This... this... If... if only... if only..."

Ren continued to sink in despair as he relived the last memory he had of his two friends. He was now all alone, and helpless. Due to the overall exhaustion, he slowly fell asleep on the cold floor of his new cell, his home, alone.



Follow the story to find out what happens to Ren; The Core Soldier!



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Wandererlithe

This is Good, im not attracted to the story at first just reading the summary but after I tried to reading it. I just got hooked in the story.

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PerfectCyclone
PerfectCyclone

This has a great story line and always has me on my toes. It's one of my favorite novels so far. I think this could become a popular book one day

4 years ago
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PLEASE MAKE MORE I NEED THIS TO SATISFY MY HUNGER FOR A GOOD AND INTERESTING BOOK THAT HAS A GOOD STORY AND I FOUND MY HOPE IN THIS BOOK FOR THIS MIGHT THE ONLY THING THAT CAN SAVE ME overall...it's a good book, would recommend

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The writing quality is ok but not especially great. The updates are sometimes stable sometimes not... The storry development is not especially bad, but does not make much sense eather. Characterdesign is the big problem of the storry. Characters seem to make their choices only to bring forward the plot and do not have their own motives. The Ideas for the world is an slightly original esper setting. Sadly the premis ruins the rest of the setting.

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