Your strength is more powerful...hahaha then I just have to upgrade my power so I more powerful than you
You Have a powerful pet...hahaha then I just have to upgrade this stray cat to become the primordial white tiger
You have a powerful sword that can cut steel...hahaha then I just have to upgrade this kitchen knife to a divine weapon that can cut the heaven itself
My power is Upgrading...
This is my first time writing a story in English ... so I ask all of you readers for your advice
I made this story for my pleasure and to make you enjoy it so don't give me your harsh comment
If you want to read this then please read and if you don't, then go search other stories
p.s All characters in this story belong to their own creator except my own creation
First World: Douluo Dalu 2
Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!
Why does he look like such a prick in that cover? He has such a punchable face...I just get this feeling like I want to just beat the **** out that face. Lmao! Now onto the actual story. It's...ight. There's a system if u like that.
The story is good,it has a nice Character development, good mc and system. The only thing lacking is the grammar but it is still passable...
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the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything
i will give 5 star for the incest..... thanks sensei --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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For me this novel is good, I can see author improvement in this story. I very aware that not all story is perfect... but even though the novel is still lacking at few aspect, I still give author 5 stars
Very good novel.only slow release rate per chapter.If you are still okay with that then you like or love this novel.I am specially fan or OP MC, group or organization building where mc is the leader.This is also have similarities with pocket hunting dimension novel where Yuhao(MC or soul land 2 Mc) is hunting on another dimension to get spirit bones,ring and etc.Looking forward for the upcomming chapters ^_^.
nonsense.mc stupid.he started a successful company but naive and stupid.money can't fill his heart hahahaha.mc has no brains.no logic.the author must be a kid.The novel has no logic. The mc has no brain.
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Amazing concept amazing story, and grammar improving. Suggestions of world travel. Over Lord Naruto Marvel Dc Dxd Familiar of zero. Transformers. High school of the dead. Dragon ball z One punch man